this story was fantastic. I loved it all!

Really loved this story and how sweetly it ended. Most Ravy stories I read have none of the other characters we've all learned to love. It's nice to see more than just the hot parts (not that I'm complaining! I love me some Rachel and Ivy!) but sometimes we need the other people in their lives to make it special. Thank you for your story, I really loved reading it.

Love it.

Thanks for sharing!

love youre story please keep goimg its really good

I've said it before: if you don't write professionally, you, in all sincerity, should. Seriously.

Now, if only I could acquire the rights to Rachel Morgan and have you pen the rest of the series, I'd be a very happy girl ;3

Having finished the latest book I'm convinced Kim Harrison is a literary sadist. Certainly if Ivy and Rachel get together that would effect her story, but... well, a girl can only take so much teasing before she gets fed up (talking about me).

But back to you. I don't know how you do it? Your mastery of comedy, drama, and romance are brilliant. I'd gladly pay to read this kind of talent in print.

Highly Satisfactory!

With so many Rachel Morgan books, one can easily forget how horribly Ivy's been molested and abused -on an epic scale. Honestly, I pity her character more than Rachel's. The witch's -usually self-inflicted- misery seems to pale, a drop in the bucket compared to the years of physical, emotional and psychological abuse Ivy's suffered.

And people wonder why I hate -more than I love- Rachel in the Books. I'd love nothing more for Ivy to find that "perfect love" and ditch the walking, torturous calamity that is Rachel Morgan.

I love how in chapter one Rachel was convinced that she would never want Ivy to bite her, nor would she beg her to do so. But in this chapter she's clinging to Ivy and begging her to bite her more. It was so ironic. And further proves just how hot Ivy is.

.Ever.

i love the ur rachel and ivy...actually thank got hooked on the rachel morgan series...so thank you SO much...please keep posting stories bout them :D

Nice, I really like the Kristen Ivy tag team. Rachel really walked into that one.

-Kate

very good so far, i havent even read this series but you have made me need to get it! great job

What a wonderfully written story full of beautiful emotion!

sam

I love your Rachel and Ivy stories! I think you should do a longer Rachel and Ivy story though. ONe with NC-17 chapters in them. I die every time you cut off right before a sex scene! You should do a story based on the 7th book that just came out: White witch, black curse. Where rachel and ivy get together or rachel realizes that it would be better to be bound to ivy than to get bound by another vampire. rachel needs to realize her feelings for ivy! please do another story for rachel and ivy. there aren't enough fics based on these books and yours blow all the others out of the water! Cat

Great story and great ending. I look forward to more of your work!

beautiful. u capture all of the characters so perfectly. i am sad this is over, but u ended it well. almost made me cry! if only the real world was like this!