I like it, it's simple yet well written. Good job!

That was... Wow. I kinda like the idea of Max actually liking Jeb..

wow that was really good

Thats so sad! What's a dog tag? They use it in war? Ok, nvm me. Lolz. Nice work!

xD XD xD!

um

okay, first of all, WHAT THE H*L* DOES AU MEAN! now i have that off my chest, it is a great start and you can go anywhere with it! i cant wait for more!