Good story! :)

It was awesome! I loved your story, I simply couldn't get enough of it. You should need to write new amazing long Kessi one-shot!

Wow. I totally loved this. It had love, realizations, paradigm shifts, passion, everything. And best of all, it had the right ending :)

Perfect!

I love the story. Great writing. Kyle and Jessi are amazing together. They should be together, and I hope they end up together in the season (Episode 8 was amazing!). Keep up the good writing, and I hope you continue to write stories like this. Kessi Forever!

Really sweet! I love your fics!

I absolutely hated it. Usually when people write fan fiction, they usually don't do justice to the original production. Either that or they completely change the story. It doesn't matter if it's Kyle XY or Harry Potter or whatever.

And I hate the ending with all my heart. Kyle and Amanda are soulmates. Jessi and Kyle shouldn't be together. Kyle loves Amanda, not Jessi.

No constructive criticism needed - this was amazing. Great job and thank you for adding to the Kessi ship :)

This was really well done!

You really had me going there with all the different dream sequences and it definitely pulled at my heartstrings every time it turned out that what had just happened was just a dream. Well done! It was very imaginative.

My only major note of constructive criticism at the moment is that you typed "gagging" instead of "gauging" in the story.

Keep on writing!

I loved it

that was real good real good write more more please

i love the jessi & kyle there made for each there

loved it wow wow

Hey, I like the flow in your sentences and the details.

Nice.

good night or good whatever depending on when you read this.

Bye.

My english isn't good enough,but I want to say that I love this fanfic.

I think that Jessi and Kyle must be together,they're made for each other - has been the first girlfriend of Kyle,it's true and special too,but I don't know...their love is like 'sibling love',not a couple.

However,with Jessi I can see a 'madly love',more real...and you're explicated it absolutely fine.

:)Bye!

It's official.

I love you.

This was an AMAZING story. I swear, yes, you made a few spelling and grammatical errors and you misspelled Jessi's name wrong, but the content. The way you write.

I was in awe.

PLEASE continue. I need to read some mild Kessi smut. Yes, I am a perv. :)

But seriously, stay with the KXY fanfiction. It works for you.