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Anastasiya
2009-10-03 . chapter 2
It's very funy, despite being predictable in the second part of the second chapter. Nevertheless, laughed hard. Keep writing!
Truth-Kills
2009-09-17 . chapter 2
XD OH WOW. That ending made me laugh so hard!! I like the story, I find it captures the personality of the characters quite well. One minor thing, I thought I'd point out...

"Why couldn’t he say it? Those were simple English, yet it took him such a great effort to say them."

I think it should be, it was simple Japanese because he's Japanese, but! A trivial matter, so no worries.

I'll be awaiting an update to this cute story you have going on~!
LuminousSoul
2009-07-20 . chapter 1
Very good! :D
Can't wait for the next chapter! ^^
JFantasist
2009-07-16 . chapter 2
hahahaha! a **! roflmfao!
this chapter=success
peacemakerwarfreak
2009-07-16 . chapter 2
Wow...that made me laugh so hard suddenly! Please continue! XD
JokerAlchemist24
2009-07-15 . chapter 2
I can tell English isn't your language, but you are still a great writer. Update soon!
Huny bun-bun
2009-07-15 . chapter 2
ROLF! *drops on the floor laughing* that was the best! please oh please continue soon!
SadandLonelyOne
2009-07-15 . chapter 2
Figures Ussagi san would put one in there.
Bfly-Ronaldita
2009-07-15 . chapter 2
lmao! This was so freaking funny and so like Usagi-sand lol! jejeje I want to read some more:) Gimme!:) Lol
face_behind_the_mask
2009-06-10 . chapter 1
Update please!
Maisha-lioness
2009-06-08 . chapter 1
please, please, PLEASE update soon! i really want to know what happens next!!
Bfly-Ronaldita
2009-04-02 . chapter 1
Hey I just wanted to tell u that your fic is fun to read:)
The only mistake I saw that really bothered me was when u wrote "sexes". You can use "sexes" when you're talking about human beings, sexes being the masculine and the feminine. In this fic u should have said something like "because he was thinking about his sexual encounter with Usagi last night". Hope you don't take it wrong:) ^-^ See ya
xXMewNekoXx
2009-03-27 . chapter 1
aw poor misaki D=
next chapter!!
HachiLockKey
2009-02-27 . chapter 1
Tht was so sad...I want to read more please! ;_;
katsuki
2009-01-24 . chapter 1
can't wait 4 next chapter !
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