tambrathegreat has a somewhat longer work with the same theme--Hermione with Lucius, and then with Draco. Can't remember the title, but then all of her stuff is good.

Oh! You do need to make this a multi-chapter fic! However, very nicely done in 200 words, too!

Oh claps hands Great Job. Aww Poor Hermione in love with two very powerful men. I can't wait to read more when your up to writing another chapter.

Hugs youtight