Oh this was well done. I really, really loved this story. The writing/grammar was good, the plot was excellent, and the characterizations were spot on.

One thing I have had a problem with with Rose / TenII stories is how so many people kind of make him... impotent. Just a lost little puppy dog following Rose. I loved your TenII because most of the time he was just... The Doctor being The Doctor, with subtle little differences that make him his own man. He realistically worried that his kiss wouldn't work, but for the most part was still the confident man we all love.

Fantastic story, thanks for sharing it. :)

I've been looking for something like this for a while, something with 10.5 that weren't pure angst or fluff, something with a little action and adventure. It turned out to be surprisingly hard to come by. So know i'm very glad i found your story, it was just what i wanted:)

Awesome. Great story. D

Fantastic story!

I'm not usually a fan of human Doctor stories, but yours was brilliant. The interactions between Rose and 10.5 were very well written and realistic. The last-half with less drama and more action was great as well. The scene with the Doctor facing a dragon inspired me to draw such a scene. My drawing doesn't match your scenery exactly though. I'll send you a link to the completed drawing (it's not done yet) if you want. Just let me know. _

Again, great story. I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

-MF

I looked over this story the other day, and I have to say that I like your idea.

Good job with the whole thing!

Beautiful story, I read the whole thing in one go because I just couldn't stop reading. :) I love how you addressed 10.5/Rose's relationship, absolutely perfect.

A delightful, meaningful, imaginative, well-plotted, and thoroughly enjoyable story! 10 out of 10 stars!

I really do enjoy your writing. Thank you for posting it!

Brilliant! Fantastic! Molto Bene! Five stars and all that. My new favorite. :D And personally, I loved chapter 6. Absolutely nothing wrong with character development and resolution. I think that subject matter is exactly what has most Ten/Rose shippers so ambiguous about 10.5. I know it does me. Anyway, Ta!

Awesome...and he didn't say it back:)

Hey, just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed this story and I think you have a great writing style! I look forward to read more of your stories in the future!

Congrats on your mini-epic novel! I admire the fact you resisted posting straight up and instead completed your story! It's all the more enjoyable, being able to read through it in one or two goes! When's the sequel? And now I'm going to fan your ego by saying: ever thought of publishing?

Cheers!

Moe

That was a really great story, thoroughly enjoyed it. The humour especially. Think you should write another adventure for our couple in the parallel universe.

Great Stuff!

realy enjoyed the fic. Loved the ending. hope you write more 10.5 stories.

They didn't make any promises to Jackie, they just replied indignantly ;)

Wonderful story; thanks for sharing it with us!

A great conclusion to what I thought was a brilliant story! :D