Lol. This Story Was Practically Perfect! IT Had Shawn Being Cute, A Bit Shy, It Had Lassie Being Impressed By Shawn, & It HAd Some Great Sex... The Only Thing It Was Missing Was Some Hurt. But That's Just My Preference. XD

Really Great Story! X3

Ooh how yummy! I needed some good, well-written Shassie to wet my palette with the direction this new season is going. I really dislike the Shules and the way they are taking the new season (too much Juliet emphasis, not enough jokes). This really made me totally happy!

Hey hey I know its been a while since you've written this, but the gun oil is called "CLP" (I forget what it stands for), and it is a very slick, very slippery yellow substance. I think it would be fine for a quickie, in response to some of your previous reviewers, as long as its washed out soon afterwards.

Anyway, 3 the gun-kink because I share it. Lovely work!

... *drools* FUCK WAS THAT HOT!

haha i love this thing

You should have more reviews, you write good kinky slash. Write more.

One of the best Shassie fanfic I ever read! HOT HOT HOT! It made me horny and fantasized that I was Shawn, mmmmm... GREAT!

Gun oil? Really? Doesn't sound like a very good lubricant.

Wonderful...Absolutely wonderful...I mean, Gun Kink? Brilliant.

Seriously. You melted my brain.

Thanks for the read.

LOVE IT SO MUCH!

... gun oil... *snickers*

This is great. Adorable. Just one thing bothered me:

Gun oil? That seems like it'd be really bad for you/completely ineffective/gross.

Yeah, it's great. It's refreshing to see some good grammar.

-LGF

Grahr. This story is so hot I could have sworn there were flames pouring out of my moniter.

Nicely written, very sexy. I applaud your work. :)

Hot damn! That was just...just great. Who wouldn't love an Irish cop fucking them?

so hot!