I'm so glad I found your fic. Ever since I played the game, I have always liked Chain/Mag. Linear may be pretty, but Chain is just too cute, and you can see she'd do anything for Mag, even if he's too oblivious to realize her true feelings. Evolution fics are rare, specially with this adorable couple, so keep up the good work.

This is probably the best romance Evolution story there is on . You should be proud. :)

Mag/Chain always did strike me as a better couple then Mag/Linear anyways...

wow! that was cute! _ never really seen a Chain/Mag fic, but it's a REAL nice change from Linear/Mag (not that i hate it, but i mean, hellooooo! ...i like Yurka/Linear better _) You have to write more fics like this! ?

I just started playing this game, I glad I caught your story, it was really good.

Can't Pepper get arrested for that?

I like this story. Personally, I think Chain and Mag make a better couple than Linear and Mag. But neither here nor there. Great story.

aw.. that was sweet. usually, i don't like the chainXmag thing... but you did it well. good work!