Heh, not bad, for a S.H.F. (Sugar high fic.) Personally, I seroiusly doubt that you could stick vegeta in a little ball, at least not if you don't enjoy dentures. But all in all, I give it 7 outta 10.

no way you must have had a lot i mean alot of coffee cause goten could have smashed jupitor with one blow but hey he was young so thats makes sense,but with guko and sailormoon she was way out matched in fighting and with vegeta helios was stupid to take him out cause with just one and i mean one (and his weakest)vegeta could have desamated endymion by a whole lot now dont get me wrong i was first and foremost a sailormoon fan before i really knew about dbz so i like sailormoon but cmon the zsenshi out match the the sailorsenshi by alot but it was a great fic anyways me likes ja ne

lmfao thats great. Pro. Just Pro. _V keep it up

*laughs* man that was funny! i too wonder why helio withdrew vegeta. hehe...very nice.

can't wiat for the interviews!

*blink* Oy... be looking for a Pokeball Z coming out from me soon! I've always loved the idea and never capitalized...

Nuts! Just nuts!

hahaha! that was funny! are u going wright another chapter of this?(after u drink 25 gallons of coffee that is?)

FUNNY..LOL

that was funny lol