 ylila 2009-01-24 . chapter 1I liked it :D
One correction which I picked up on, when you say that a rogue spell hit his leg, its rogue not rouge. Plus, if youre the kind of person who doesn't read the intro box because its normally spoiler-ish, you wouldn't know that Blaise is Blaise if you see what I mean.
I think that's it.
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