itzzzz very very beautiful n touchn..u'v descrbd dis father daughtr bonding excptionlly..keep it up...hope fr more frm u...

I know you write this a long time ago, but a friend just rec'd it to me. You did a lovely job. Congratulations!

AWWW! So very sweet! Great Job!

Ilove this daddy daughter story. I think there are far too few sweet stories of the bond shared by parent and child especially Edward and Nessie. I love seeing Edward as a parent. I also love the book by Robert Munsch.

wow. how does this story not have more reviews? I really enjoyed it. This was as sweet as "I'll Love You Forever" with a less depressing ending. Bravo.

this was cute

Aw... That's so sweet!

This is such a sweet story. Great Job!

WRITE MORE! AMAZING! LUV IT! PLEASE WRITE MORE

Aw... So adorable! I lovemit! I love Edward/Nessie cutesy bonding fanfics. Write more! PLEASE!

OMG! this is so kyot! i love it so much! xDD

ek how on earth do you write so good!

xD i love this story! lol well... im glad that i clicked on ur home page so that i could read your many other storyies for twiight other than "The Great Bird Migration"! Cause u kno that i love that one 2! xD

Well, before my sister literally kicks me off the computer (or pushes me out of the chair) ive g2g!

byes!

Aww. That was so cute. I loved it!

I loved it! this is a very nice change for me, as most of the nessie fics have nessie being a) a spoiled brat b) a typical high-school girl with a boyfriend other than jake c) really, really stupid. BUT! your nessie was none of the three, and on that i applaud you. *applauds* so! thank you for my five minutes of having something nice to read!

I feel like such a baby!

That story made me cry... I hardly ever cry, I think it was the whole father/daughter moment mixed with "I'll love you forever" because as creepy as the mother in that book can be, I love it. Phenomanl... and did you say it was you first fanfic because this is simply amazing.

Excellent story. I, too, fear thunder but lightening more so.