I like the way the unspoken intimacy develops between them in this story.

If her jumping didn't disturb the potion vials on the table, how did it destroy fat cauldrons sitting on the floor?

Aside from that, this was pretty neat. (seems unfair that potions that make Snape's hair fall limp only make Hermione's hair frizz more...)

aw so cute :)

It's just like hermione, always stressing about everything xD

I could totally see this happening! We all know that Sevvie's a softie on the inside ;]

This is a very interesting. and good story. Keep smiling. :-)

Oh this would be perfect to continue! I hope you do!

Snape didn't even get angry or laugh as she threw the fit? Who's Mike? Too funny. Thanks for a cute one-shot.

cute :3 i look forward to reading more.

No, No, No!! Surely this cannot be complete? Please tell me that you are not really going to leave this here; it's simply too good! Stories as good as this are getting increasingly rare it seems and, whilst I am not a particular fan of SS/HG pairings, I can be persuaded if the story/writing is good! Please, please say you will write more on this; what can I do to make you change your mind?!!

Hmm. Thought provoking, and though it seems unfinished, I'm glad you ended it as you did. Thank you for that.

-Arciere