This was a wonderful story. You write almost like poetry and all those things that really needed to be said between Meredith and Derek, you made them say. I very much like the maturity of their relationship in your story. Derek is really McDreamy here and your take on what might go on inside his head was really believable. Very well done! :)

*squee* so beautiful! i love that you made them say 'i love you.' wonderful writing!

Really great story - very thoughtful and nicely written. Looking forward to more, or whatever it is you write next.

Thanks for sharing.

Loved it!

lovely...

awesome update! i am so glad they got to talk!

I'm glad he waited. It shows how far Derek has come in his understanding and acceptance of Meredith.

This was a great chapter. I'm go glad you decided to add it.

I'm so glad you decided to write another chapter! It was written beautifully and even made me a little teary-eyed at the end. The talking and cuddling and I love you's...just what I'd love to see on Grey's! Thanks for a part two! :)

That was fabulous!

that was really adorable and sweet. i loved both chapters. it was a nice end to the episode. i wish we got to see mer/der have these moments. i was glad we got the mer/der prison scene but i would have liked to see them at home too. thank you for having mer say i love you. i'm getting annoyed that she hasn't said it again on the show.

Amazing ! Really ! I'm speechless !
You get them so well...
Meredith's "I love you" was so powerful, it was like she was saying it to me !
I hope you have more stories in store ! You really are a good writer !
Thank you !

Anne

That was great!

Loved it!

Are you planning on continuing it?

Very well written.
I loved it.

Good! Keep going! Update soon!