 The Non-Existing Person 2009-08-27 . chapter 10That was really really good! I'm looking forward to some of your other stuff since we seem to have the same taste :) |
 Miss Malfaisant 2009-04-10 . chapter 1I'm reading this over again. Because it was that fabulous. (:
Grammatical errors in this chapter:
1. Commas separate introductions; missing comma in sentence two.
2. "...so she could have her hands free I she needed." ...Yeah. Not sure what that was supposed to be.
3. "Vegitation" is spelled VEGETATION. |
 Miss Malfaisant 2009-04-09 . chapter 10That was absolutely fabulous. You've written this magnificently.
His characterization was SPOT ON, right down to the last detail. It is extremely difficult to capture and write his character well, and you've pulled it off.
I mean, this was ABSOLUTELY FUCKING BRILLIANT. The imagery and her thoughts and the description of him and her fear and everything OHMYGOD.
Amazing.
I'll have you know that I am a very picky reader and it is quite an accomplishment for a piece of literary work to hold my focus and attention.
This is very well done. It's particularly refined and very well depicted and detailed; it's quite an accomplishment for chapters as short as this to be that powerful. It is actually probably a health hazard to those with weak hearts and stomachs. Well done.
I can't even remember the last time I laughed out loud reading something. YOU WIN TEH INTERNETZ.
I don't give pleasant reviews - well, almost ever, so you're very special indeed.
And I NEVER, EVER favorite things. So you must be some sort of God. |
 Lynnicaec 2009-02-20 . chapter 10I don't know why but I thought Graverobber was kind of like Lancelot but I was so surprised to see this fic because never thought anyone would make a connection between them. Maybe its just because King Arthur and Repo! are two of my obsessions but what ever I love this fic. I like how tough Shilo is and how her a gravedigger are like FWB in this. :)
Caitlyn |
 Flash Foreward 2009-02-15 . chapter 10This is awesome! |
 MrsMargeryLovett 2009-02-14 . chapter 10I absolutely loved this story! It was beautifully written and I have doted the past half hour to reading the whole thing. Only problem is, I kinda wish the chapters had been a bit longer. The whole thing was great, and I'm thrilled you didn't babble as I tend to do in my stories, but I so would have liked to see inside that mind a little more. But anyway, thanks for this story so much! It was great. And it's definately given me some ideas on how to improve the idea for a Repo! story I've got in my head |
 Lexiphane 2009-02-13 . chapter 3I love the last part of this chapter, the one eye closed, finger gun "ka-pow". Man, there is something about it that's still just a little bit naive!Shilo and is so them. |
 MxAcid 2009-02-11 . chapter 10Aww, that was asd. But the whole series was pretty funny. Could you possibly, well I don't know. Make a sequel. |
 When Vegetarian Pandas Attack 2009-02-09 . chapter 10Ahahaha, nice. I loved it, made me laugh at every chapter. A definite fave for me. |
 KitMarlowe 2009-02-07 . chapter 10I cried. Correction, I AM crying. I'm sitting on my bed crying. They were all amazing, every one of them. I think five was my favorite. But that last one...my heart broke. Did you ever see Ever After? It reminded me of the line "They did not live happily ever after, but they lived." to paraphrase.
I know I'm rambling, but I just wanted you to know, it had an effect. Hope you write more for this pairing. |
 Destiny 2009-02-07 . chapter 10 ello, hey you sould write more? |
 Hatter-Zombie.ate.your.brains 2009-02-05 . chapter 10Aww very nice |
 shiromisa 2009-02-05 . chapter 10 This is the first REPO! fanfiction I've read, mostly because I love this movie and was scared of having my mental images of the characters sullied by a bad fanfic. I had no fear of that with this one. Pure gold. Thank you for getting things off to a good start. |
 PuckRox 2009-02-02 . chapter 10Good story! I loved each chapter, giving the reader a different perspective into their relationship. Very enjoyable, and I thought the Graverobber was kept very much in character, and Shilo's character changed well with age.
Great job! |
 derangedfangirl 2009-02-01 . chapter 10Oh this was good. This was so, so good. I'm afraid you broke my brain- this had me attempting to stuff my fist into my mouth to stifle the laughter, sniffling like a four year old, and wanting desperately to reach through the screen to smack one (or both) of them.
...In the span of two sentences.
WELL DONE. I cannot wait to see more from you. ;) |