 bauba bee 10/11/09 . chapter 1i like this story
and pudding cups
bbut u made me hungry!\\and i cant eat 3 AM! |
 Account Awaiting Deletion 3/27/09 . chapter 1Yes! Yes! Yes! Please continue! I'm relishing the idea of hearing more of Jake's exploits straight from the American Hero himself.
I loved the last line the best. And the whole diabetes theme? Y'know, if they'd written it like this in the first place then the ruddy episode would never've got banned.
Pudding cups? Never had one. But boy, do they sound good!-LJ |
 of self 1/25/09 . chapter 1That was really good. You write Jake hilariously well and you had me laughing by the end. And I think you perfectly characterized Lilly and Oliver. Bu yeah for me the best part was Lilly chasing Jake with a bathroom plunger in hand( gross). Good times. Anyways I hope you continue this, I know I'm gonna be looking forward to Jake's escapades if they are as hilarious as this one. And as for pudding cups, I really dont know what to think of them because I havent eaten a pudding. But I like chocolate so I guess I'd like choclate pudding cups then. Update as soon as you can.) |
 AColdSky 1/24/09 . chapter 1OH I love Jake Ryan stories! You just don't hear about them anymore. |
 TheRightWrongs 1/24/09 . chapter 1haha this was freaking hilarious it has to be continued! |
 LittleRedOne 1/24/09 . chapter 1I love your Jake! He's awesome. He kept getting off track and bringing anything he could back to him. That's so him. Great job, really, I love it. Plus it had the whole Loliver thing going for it, which is awesome. And I liked Miley too. She's hard to write, but you do so well with her.
I would absolutely love to see more messed up adventures in the life of Jake Ryan: American Hero. :P
Me and pudding cups get along sometimes. When I do eat them I either like the chocolate with caramel or vanilla with chunks of Reese's peanut butter cups. So good. Except now I kind of want one. Hmm.
Anyway! Great fic!
Kelly |