A very promising start I hope you will come back and finish this one it has much potential.

this is good. please post more

Great start!

Very intriguing!

You have GOT to keep it up! NOW!-Ivy-

Excellent fic! I really like it. Uhhh...would you be nice and hurry along with the next part? Ok, I will say please. PLEASE! Ok, I shut up now! Bye now