Oh god help poor Val xD I can't wait for the next chapter!~

Aw very nice chapter ;3

Priceless!~ xD Poor Val

x3 Another lovely chapter~ more butterflies in my tummy for some reason lol

lol such an interesting chapter >w<

xD Oh Alice

xD Oh man it would suck to have someone like Alice as an aunt D: but yeah I agree The Warden is one of those creepy(yet awesome) uncles <3

Yesh >D I LOVE this!~

wow funny

awesome!

Totally loved this chapter, I was laughing so hard when Jacknife turned out to be her date. Didn't see that coming!! lol cant wait for the next chapter!

haha the part at the end is to funny im sorry haha but shes talkin with the bird. anyway i love how ur story is so far i cant wait till the next chapter! oh i also hope that john & val get together cuase the way u desribed how they got along seems to be something real good for her. just wondering where are the twins? ^-^

OK, the suicide thing is good (great thinking!), although there's something I want to say--KEEP GOING!I watch SuperJail! too, and it's easy to view the situation in my head. I must say, it leads to the fact that the next chapter should be about Val trying to commit suicide. Great Job! (Remember this line from Tim & Eric Awesome Show!)

“So, you’re saying if I don’t do what you say, I’ll become Alice?”

That line got me cracking up, mostly all of it ^^ Very awesome story and I can't wait for the Twins in the next chapter! X3

Good chapter ^-^ Can't wait for the twins to appear