interesting. _

I wish you would continued this story. I really don't want the girls to be in that team for some time but i would like to see what happens next. your fan orannis4

the first 2 chapters sound good but too sgort took about 5 mins 2 read over all

I'm actually kinda liking this story. I thought it would be hard to pick up on, but it seems easy enough. Please continue!

T_T

I actually kind of liked the not-happy ending. You must, like, toughen up, young Eevee. 8D

But this is fine too

You got your there and your theirs messed up...

No lemon? :-/

Hm, it could use a little follow up. A pokegirl is, what, half-and-half?

Nice comment on the handiness of flexibility.