The song was great. Really sweet.

that was a cool sasusaku fanfic nice work

Sexy ;)

Great fic, the ending was so sweet =) x

great story! i love how Sasuke is in this story!

This story is awesome!

I like your story...thank you.

That was so cute!

And a more realistic representation of the 'first time' than you usually find online.

Sasuke being all sweet and innocent ^^ loved it.

Your lemon was very nicely done - I really love the awkwardness, and the imperfections, actually. No one has sex like the movies on the first try, so it was nice to see a more realistic take on the SasuSaku devirginizing trope. :)

This is just gorgeous!

I liked this. It was really cute, and I thought it was in character.

I like this! I'll be moving on to the next chapter. :)

It was really good but please correct the minimal verbal errors (the past and present tense of some of the words). But aside from that, I really liked the story. Keep up the good work. And don't fret with the reviews. They will come ;)

I loved how we mostly saw this from Sasuke's POV and how they reacted to each kiss. They were really IC especially Sasuke who only admitted he liked Sakura after the fourth(?) kiss. Sakura being the only one to see Sasuke's innocent side was really sweet.

FAVING THIS LIKE WHOA. AND DL-ING THE MIX AT LJ. =D

Ahem. I'm so glad I clicked the link in the SasuSaku comm in LJ. This was sweet and hot at the same time. Love how you incorporated songs without turning the fic into a songfic. Also, did I mention it was HOT? The second chapter, especially. ;) Awkward!Innocent!Sasuke and Loud!Sakura were very amusing to read.

[PS: Was that a teeny-tiny bit of ShikaIno in the first chapter? XD]

Very great two-shot!^^ I like how you used the song, but didn't turn it into a song fic. It's an awesome story, I enjoyed reading it. 15/10