NON-THOUGHT HERE. c
I feel guilty for admitting it, but I only read Xaldin's chapter, purely out of curiosity. I've already got firm beliefs on Xigbar and Xemnas, and yet- because of your writing style- I still feel compelled to read the other chapters, even if I won't. I used this chapter to check your skills, and they're mighty fine, if I do say so myself. XD

But really, you like J&D too! I'd have never guessed! I only finished the first game when I was little and just recently started the second, but- meh. What am I to do?
Keep writing, my dear! I love it!

I really like your idea! It's real creative. I can't wait to see the other members! Your style of writing is not often seen nowadays. Especially the one you had on Xemnas! I honestly hate Xaldin, but you made me like him the smallest bit. PLEEEEEEEEEASE! Please finish this. :D heehee!

Wow.

I really liked your portrayal of Xaldin.

It was really really good.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.

I think your portrayals of the Organization members so far have been excellant. I can't wait to read the rest. I'm particularly amazed at Xaldin, since I've always hated him and this actually made me feel bad for him.

Keep up the good work!

My non-thoughts
I'm kinda tempted to go write crack!Xaldin/Belle. XD

Awesome!

Xaldin is one of the many undeveloped Organization members so brownie points for this great story you've created from very little info! Can't wait to read Vexen's story! :D

I like this story...it's very interesting. And I think you've got the characters right too. update it soon. :D

Wow, I think you got Xigbar's character spot on. He does seem to 'enjoy' his Nobodyness.

And so a lovely note i will leave! Its so angasty its happy in a twisted way (to me that is) will the next tweleve be angst or will there be some humor?)

These are so awesome! I can't wait to read more D

Great job. Seriously, it was wonderful. so keep at it!