| Reviews for Unforgiven |
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LaceNLeather24 2/1/12 . chapter 1Ugh! I wish this wasn't a one shot because it was just getting good. |
Glamagirl 7/15/09 . chapter 1"It was just too hard to let go and too easy to give in" Wow I loved this, I'm putting it right to my favorites! I like the bittersweet touch in it... I'm a sucker for this kind of fics and this one was just perfect. It was nice how this came full circle, starting and ending at Unforgiven, lovely! I also liked how Steph went to his locker room to check on him... it was the begining to it all, seven years! They are so drawn to each other, it's meant to be D I just hope that 'tomorrow' will bring them more time together... and less time appart... *Nani* |
jerichosbabe 4/2/09 . chapter 1Before I go into this, I must say that I'm getting senile in my "old" age. I thought that I had read a lot of your stories before, once I started skimming through the list I realized that I was crazy and need to have my memory checked... :S Nonetheless, I'm catching up now! With that being said, I like the way this story was set up. I like the contrast between the way things were then and how they are now between the two of them. I loved the line Matt said: "She's not misguided. She's just a bitch." It's so bluntly put that it made me laugh - plus, for the time it was being said, it was true. When Stephanie and Chris go to meet each other away from H, and everything comes back to them...that's always such a powerful thing to try and convey and I think that it came across pretty well here. Very nicely done! |
THE Kid Hardy 3/31/09 . chapter 1My goodness, it's way too easy to give in, and especially when the one you want to give in to is the one and only Christopher Keith Irvine. lol. Awesome one shot love. I really should read more of your fics! |
TheRealRenee 2/12/09 . chapter 1This is awesome! Aww, I love how you have them still in love after all those years that have gone by between them. It's sweet but bittersweet in a way. I can't wait to see what else happens. Update soon! |
steph-mcmahon-fan 2/8/09 . chapter 1Lol. The fact that you have given us another story makes me smile. This was great. I'm not sure if it's a one-shot or not, but if it's not, please let this be your new focus as far as fanfics go. I love the start of this story. It sounds so promising and it has so much potential that I just want to let my mind sway on what could possibly happen, if anything. Great job. I am hoping for an update if this is not a one-shot. LOVED IT! -D |
DCFanatic4life 2/2/09 . chapter 1I loved this when I read it the first time and I love it now. I loved how you brought everything full circle. It started at Unforgiven and then it ended and now it's starting back at Unforgiven. The two of them are just so in sync with one another, Matt and Jeff saw it when they were betting whether Steph would follow Chris or not. I thought it was really kind of symbolic when the only seat open was next to Steph, leaving her in between Chris and Paul. Then when she gets up to see Chris without a second thought, it was like she was really choosing Chris. Add to that the fact Paul didn't even care and just continued his conversation, it's even more telling. They need each other and they fell back into each other and it's obvious that the time apart, all that separation, it didn't really affect the people they were together. They still wanted each other and loved each other. And the ending is so hopeful. It's like, they don't even are what tomorrow may bring, the moment is too perfect for them to just leave it like that. I hope they did run off together, that would be great. Great job. :) |
aresgirl 1/25/09 . chapter 1i liked it. isn't it weird to see jericho and stephanie act like nothing has happened between them now? but he's been acting like a jerk to her lately. |
katierobin23 1/24/09 . chapter 1YAY! I love new stories from you! AND its Chris and Steph! Im so excited right now! |
StephanieIrvine 1/24/09 . chapter 1 Nice fic, very glad you posted it. I mean I love my smoochy stories to end happily, but this was real nice. Bittersweet almost. That end line was awesome. Thanks for writing and sharing this. |