I really like it, it's different and unique. You should keep going with it! I would really like to read more. :)

Jack is ooc if he isn't the one who appreciates nature. the time traveling is a bit confusing, not the paradox, the idea of not knowing which point of her life are we seeing. This is under humor but it's not really funny. Other than that, the story's not bad.

Very interesting. Keep up the good work!:)