 Heartbroken Confession 2009-12-09 . chapter 5Interesting. I'm assuming they've gone back in time? |
 Caroline Berlin 2009-12-06 . chapter 5They sound like they're acting how they would after Sasuke defected and all the recent chapters happened. Hm... time travel maybe? Or just an au universe? |
 TheOneThatIsAddictedToHPfics 2009-12-05 . chapter 5continue! |
 Fantasy-Magician 2009-12-02 . chapter 5Nice story with a very nice plot :)
I also like how you write about Konoha's most famous jounin it's so funny LOL
It was nice to read FF with no bashing...
ps: No pairing? (I hope not) |
 Tidmag 2009-12-01 . chapter 3 Wow, you are doing an awesome job on this story. It's subtle enough that you know what's happening, but it's from a viewpoint not overly abused. Kudos for originality. |
 tatewaki2000 2009-11-28 . chapter 5I love this fic.
I hope everything turns out all right. Short, but I love the detail, and ur writing style. :3 |
 tatewaki2000 2009-11-28 . chapter 4lol |
 tatewaki2000 2009-11-28 . chapter 3;] |
 tatewaki2000 2009-11-28 . chapter 2:) |
 tatewaki2000 2009-11-28 . chapter 1:D
wonderful |
 terrorofthehighway 2009-11-27 . chapter 5 Nice story. I bet it is a time travel fic! Love the Gai humour.
I don't get some bits though:
Chapter 1:
He stood and looked over the now official genin. “Welcome to Team Seven,” Kakashi said, “Be at the bridge at six o'clock tomorrow morning.” He disappeared, feeling intensely grateful to get away from the kids.
So why is Kakashi looking for them in Chapter 2?
Chapter 3:
Thus, Kakashi started working on the third member of his nut case of a team.
In the story, he hasn't started working on Naruto yet. So it should be Sasuke, since "working" has the undertones of Kakashi having spoken to Naruto and Sakura. Perhaps "observing" would be a better word.
Further on:
Sasuke was... interesting. He was quiet almost to the point of being rude and obviously the most experienced fighter on the team. The profiles had spoken of arrogance and disturbing tendencies towards revenge for his fallen clan. By all rights, it was Sasuke who should have been second in command.
Not first? By all rights, who should have been the first in command?
But still a great fic! In fact, cue request for update since this is so good. The faster, the better. :) |
 SpiegelofNowhere 2009-11-26 . chapter 5Can't really think of anything particularly articulate to say, apart form the fact that I find this story very interesting and engaging, and am looking forward to further installments. |
 yuhki minamitani 2009-11-25 . chapter 1i really enjoy this fic so i hope you update soon! |
 Mistical Kat 2009-11-24 . chapter 5I don't think I've read a naruto story quite like this before. You are a talented author and i have enjoyed reading your story so far. Please update soon. |
 Saturnblue 2009-11-23 . chapter 5I wonder did the trio went back in time to start things over while we are looking at Kakashi's point of view. It will be interesting to see how their relationship will go. Hehhe |