Cool story! To bad there no ATFE thing! I have an RP in general if anyone's interested.

WAH SO SAD! Good story and yes Taisuke is an idiot so we can't blame him...but we love him anyway haha

This is pretty good.

I'm happy that there are more Alive stories now.

It makes me full.'3

I think that you underestimate yourself and your writing skills. In your Authors Note, you seem rather insecure that you did a good job when really, you did an excellent job! (Excuse me evaluation, I just finished Psychology and that stuff sticks with ya ;D
I thought it was great for showing Hirose's thoughts and emotions, and it seems close to the manga series, which it great. Wonderful work!

I like it, that's all I can really say. Words fail me.

Wow, that is really good. Hirose was always my favorite before he became a comrade. But he has to be down there somewhere... there is no way someone so incredibly cute could become so incredibly evil. It's just not fair...

I saw no failed metaphors or incoherant sentences! This was really good, a fascinating idea. I actually like drabble, so I don't really mind. Keep up the good work. One of the few things I don't like about your stories is that they often aren't long enough, just when I got into this story, it was over!)

Oh, my I had to read this a few times.

To get it all completley.

It's very good, but very depressing.

o. But so it the Manga itself, you here they're animating it?

OH, drat I got off topic.
Anyway, I enjoyed it! You did a good job!(Sorry, I'm not good at critism.)