that would never happen,and angel thinks cordy is the mom of connor you should watch the show a bit more...

really good, but i think you should have put in a bit more description.

Dude! Its me! Raziel! Cool story! Way to go!

i loved the story

well, the grammer sure has improved, but its very short...interesting plotline, though. I can't wait 'til the next chapter is up. Can u add a bit more description, plz?

it's good, although I mus say that the angelus bit was a bit predictable. But I can't really complain I think my stories are too

good plot, but sucky writing

best story ever

I'm really enjoying the plot, but it's rather hard on the eyes. Paragraphs and quotation marks can be difficult to place, I know. You should find yourself a really great beta-reader. Interesting concept!

Interesting story. It has potential, but is very difficult to read; the grammar and punctuation are horrible. Please use seperate paragraphs whenever a new person speaks. Have you ever considered a beta reader? This should provide you with some resources: .com/angel/beta_ With some tweaking, this story has the potential to be excellent.

Not bad, but difficult to read. Some of the grammar is poor, and you need to remember that each time a new person speaks, it's a new paragraph.

Just for the record, the kids name would be Allen cause Doyle was his LAST name...

It's a good story, but still hard to read. You might want to consider getting the story edited by someone else and reposting again.

GREAT STORY. A GREAT JOB IN EXPLAINING HOW THE BABY COULD HAVE

BEEN BUFFY AND ANGEL. GREAT IDEA, BUT MAYBE MAKE EACH CHAPTER A

LITTLE LONGER, AND DIVIDE THE PARAGRAPHS MORE. OTHERWISE ONCE
AGAIN GREAT STORY CAN'T WAT FOR CHAPTER THREE.

Great, Great, Great! Can't wait for chapter 3