Oh how beautiful. Bittersweet. Just how I like it! LaviLena always makes me smile.
Please write more of those amazing stories, please.

Damn! This is just great. Just great. Everything I want in a Lavi/Lenalee fiction. Beautiful and bittersweet.

I love your narrative style. It seemed very dreamy.

I've always wondered about Lavi and his duty to live the legacy of the 48 hims that came before, but you totally blew my mind with this story. So glad to have come across this.

:D Do you know of any other really good D. Gray-man fics? Any feedback would be awesome.

Thanks

This is heartbreaking. And beautiful. The last part made me cry, and the line: "Because you're all I've got," - OHHHHH, LAVI. *Dies*. This was so IC, thanks for sharing. Your writing is amazing and poetic.

Oh haunting... so so sad. I'm truly crying right now! But beautiful as well. Well writen and well thought out. But... but... oh! o.o *sobs uncontrollably screaming lavis name*

Heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time...:)

You really captured a part of them they had to face sooner or later... and you did a great job in that. So, thank you alot! :-)

I didn't want to log in at first, but I just had to favourite this. This is awesome! In all ways haha. Lavi and his 50 souls and his wanting to remember lenalee but not being able to is so tragic. And your writing style is omg omg omg.

Sorry for the incoherence heh, but I really do like this fic (:

I really loved this story! I hope one day your DGM muse attacks again and you might post another chapter, please?

Such a poignant and beautiful piece. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and I really, really love your writing style. It has this certain 'oomph' that leaves a lasting impact to the reader. Your characterization is also very commendable. I've only encountered a small number of stories wherein Lavi & Lena are in character, so I'm really glad I stumbled upon this one. Please keep writing! The fandom is in dire need of stories like yours! Spread the Lavi and Lenalaee love! _

RoyaleDeuce

w-wow. O-O

that was really sad. heartbreaking. x(

thanks for the read. ;)

So beautifully written and paced that it's heartbreaking. The last line was just the final shot to the heart.

ZOMGWTFWBDWJDWKJBDEfewjfwuef.

This is the first fanfic I've ever cried at. It's just so beautiful and tragic and touching and EVERYTHING.

My love for this pairing has just shot up by a mile.

I love this, and you for writing it. :'D

Crystal

Oh god... that was only one of the most effing depressing and beautiful things I have ever read... ouch... that pairing is so tragic and beautiful... good job...

Wow. As far as I could remember, most of the LaviLena fics that I had read are angst stories.

Besides the Lavi!Angst, Lenalee's reactions makes the story a lot more better. She always sees everyone as her "nakama", even in here. Wah. And it's... quite hard for Lavi, especially that he has 50 personas in his body. Wow. That must be hard.

I wonder where you guys got the idea about Lavi having 50 personas (he's the 49th, right?).

D Nice job _

This fic goes in my faves