Beautiful.
xLina :)

I is confused :P what did she not know?O.O i wanna know...:)

This is so beautiful. Your vocabulary, grammar, writing style... EVERYTHING... it's all perfect! You really have been an inspiration for all Sparrabethers- for me, definitely. I think your Vulnerant Omnes, Ultima Necat was one of the first Sparrabeth fics I read back in April. I was on the way to New York, then, and I swear, I couldn't look away from my screen. Probably one of the best J/E fic out there. With C overtly, you barely surprise me- you really do have a way with words, Florencia!

Do keep writing!

MsAurora

Actually I'd prefer it if you didn't live without posting once a week! But if you must...this was a lovely snippet for some closure. I don't see how it's possible that not everyone believes in this pair. They should read ur stuff. Then they'd be convinced LOL

Ooh...pretty. :)

-Zay

wow it was very good!both elizabeth and jack were 100% in character!well done!:)

Wonderful.
You capture the feelings so vividly...
The loss of easiness, the silence, the inner and outer one, the desolate attempts to go on as before and the realization that the "before" is utterly gone...
Well done.

I wish this wasn't a one-shot either.

"She did not exactly know why, but she felt she should have asked it rather than said it."

So true. She is way too...harsh during that scene. It's her own damn hole she dug herself in and it's like she's insulted by what Will thought. When you don't say anything, honey, it makes you seem awfully guilty. This sentence here makes me recall that whole scene and her expressions.

I like the reference back to the multiple Jacks. The Locker scene in AWE could have been much better, really make the Locker seem like hell rather than a sunny spot with several shirtless hot men. It's so fitting of Jack's character that even in a situation like this with Elizabeth he would still retain his sense of humor. But I also sense the hurt and the confusion on not just her part but also his, and it's this complication of how they feel about their feelings for each other that makes it impossible (in the movie) to get together. You really nailed the darker aspect of their relationship. Good job.

just absolutely fantastic, as always!

Thank you Kate for filling up the awful gap left by T&T in AWE! Your version of the missing Sparrabeth scene was so touching, so emotional,so deep ,so wonderful!
You made my day^^

Am really so very happy I stumbled upon your stories! You did it again! Fabulous! Thank you! ...And there was a kiss!

Aw, that should have been in AWE! It should have! It was great! :)

Nice story. i like it

I am completely stunned! Your story is so beautiful! :)
I can feel all the emotions being played out, the pain and the want. Gahh! If they only ended up together... It is so sad they didn't.

And when Lizzie thought why? about the kiss, well, because Jack cares for her! I'd say she should dump Will, even though he is heartbroken. Because Jack and Elizabeth are just the perfect pair.

Oh well... it is supposed to be a sense of closure, huh? Well, I'm still rooting for the pair. :)

I love the story! :) I shall add it to my favorites! :D A wonderful story just adds up to more to my wonderful weekend! :D It makes my weekend wonderfully wonderful! :P Double wonderful? Triple wonderful... interminably wonderful! Hehe! :P You should write more of these stories! :)

Hugs,
Chrissy

Omg that was deep great job and i agree their should have been a scene for jack and elizabeth in the the third