^^ I'd be interested in seeing more of this. Not that it's not interesting on its own...

Ooh, I loved this! Very nice!

I hope that you continue this story. I would like to see where you take this story. I hope that you update soon.

Thank you I enjoyed this. As you say it stands on its own but I would enjoying reading more if you do choose to write it. VP

O, I liked this very much. I'm really kind of new to NCIS but I am really drawn to Tony and Gibbs' relationship and would love to read more on this. Even if it's just a little add-on with some interaction between the two about this subject.

Word of advice. While I do like this story, you are correct in that it could be expanded upon. However, don't make it an add-on to this one. Make a separate one and either have it as a sequal to this one or make it known that this is some type of "pre-qual". I truly believe that this one stands on its own merit.

Oh, yay! You're writing for NCIS, too! E! :-) I found this on a rec list (since that's the only way I come out here). LOVE it! I do hope you decide to pursue the story. So much potential there!

A great story. Very good.

I really loved your short story. The tension between the Tony and Director Vance conversation was wonderful.

You are correct that this wraps up very nicely. However, I would love to see you delve further into this story line, perhaps in another story. You could keep this one as is and "spin off" another story from it. This is very well-written and I enjoyed it very much.

Whether you intend this to be a one-shot or not, I think it's really well done. I liked it a great deal.

I have always loved Tony stories that deal with his background. (although some are so far off canon, it's ridiculous)
I find it lacking in the real episodes. It's a rich storyline that has been dangled, in pieces, but never picked up by the writers.

Thank you for this little nugget. I would love to read more.

Fantastic story, I really like the antagonistic relationship that Vance and Tony have, it makes for interesting story potential

Oh wow, you have joined the dark side, yay! And as a Tony fan too, I squeel with barely contained excitement! I love your He-Man stories and have been a fan for years and having you join this fandom is the best thing that has happened in a long while, especially since it's a fandom that needs good authors! Is it my birthday already? Heh. I love Tony and you captured the essence between these two so wonderfully! It's nice to have another fellow NCIS Tony writer!

please continue.very interesting so far.