I ABSOLUTLEY LOVED THIS STORY. IT WAS AMAZING. I WILL SAY IT AGAIN I LOVED THIS STORY! I loved how nessie was being stubborn and fought for what she believed. I loved how Jacob always made sure that nessie was safe. I loved everything about this story.

This was such an amazing story... I really loved reading every minute of it!

This was very good I would have enjoyed a Running N/J as well!

I really lk this story! its a fav. of mine! Thanks!

Amy

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Mory

You do Jacob and Nessie very well. Love this story. I think the ending was very good, if a little predictable. The last line is fantastic , tho'. Go little miss firecraker! lol

There are quite a few typos and other mistakes in your stories but I am a big fan of your writing. You tell a good story. With some polishing I think you could tell great ones. Look forward to more of your work-Bob

i love this story! keep it going! its amazing!

jaja/

i love it...

update soon..

Hey! This was a really good story! I think it ended perfectly! I was totally rooting for letting her stay in Forks, especially because as you said Nessie had to fight for what she wanted just like Bella and Edward did. Sometimes you have to fight for what you want even if people don't agree with you. I'm sorry the ending isn't how you pictured it, but I really liked this ending! If you don't mind me asking what was your vision for the ending?

Can't wait to read more of you stories! Happy Writing!

Sugaandspice4990

That. Is. So. Damn. CUTE!

The bit about the Calm made me Aww D

And funny too, even better ha-ha

Cutest and most cleverly written FanFic Ever!

You are a true Genius

Emily

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LOL this is so funny and a really sweet story I love it please continue and very nice work :)

o crap god edward is so overprotective...

ahah..

i love it...

update soon..

What's happening?

What's he going to say? S D

Please Update

I'm giving myself brain ache trying to work it out here P

Emily

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This is a good story but work on your grammar- PLEASE! It's not illegal to use conjunctions.

Poor Ness

She was all Upset then

But good old Jake cheered her up

Jake is so Sweet in this Story!

Bless his little Heart

Great Capter

Emily

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Hurray,

you uploaded a new chapter! Honestly woman i can't believe how you write so many chapters!

It's awesome.

Keep writing please ;)