Well done

Very moving. I think that as the Tales of the Otori are such great books it is hard to add to them and make them any better - but you have and well done.

This was very sad and touching! I felt so sorry for Miki after Maya died...

When I first read the Harsh Cry of the Heron, I was in tears for the next day.

This made me teary again.

Well done :)

you have great talent in writing. outstanding. well done. i want to read more of your work :)

...stupid names...

i love these books and the feelings of miki dont get told that much and i think you did a very good job! xD

Thank you for both of these one-shots. I really liked both of them. It's a shame no one else has written any - I would have since they're my favourites, but I haven't thought of a story. Anyway, I think they are well written and thoughtout. Well done and I hope you write more.