While Harry and Ron's reaction was a little to quick and accepting, I liked this a lot. I think you needed a little more time to introduce everything that has happened to everyone else.

<3 Steel Scoprion

You are spot-on, again: fluffy Draco makes my skin crawl. However, yours is perfect! I love how romantic-comedy-esque you made this. It's extremely adorable, in a completely unnauseating way. Hard to toe that line. Very good job.

Really good!! I think, though at least to me, this basically was just a totally original story borrowing the identity of Harry Potter characters. I mean there wasn't much characterization --no bookish Hermione nor no pompous Draco. Just sweet love, which is good too.
Keep writing!

aww!
cute >.<
enjoyed it

its awesome! i really like the narrator parts. its like gossip girl or something... haha!

I really enjoyed this. It flows nicely and it wouldnt let me go. It would be amazing to hear more. :)

Aw, that was cute ^_^

I loved it! It was great to read; short and sweet. (Well, maybe not that short, but you get my point.)

A little OOC for the characters but not over the top. Sweet and light-hearted. I like it!

This is nice - will there be a sequel, perhaps?

That was sweet. I loved how you made it like a narration and movie themed story. Well done. It's not a mind-blowing masterpiece (no offense) but it's a sweet love story meant to pull at your heart strings and be a cute little memorable piece. I like it.
~Silver

Very different, very nice! The story has the quirks of brilliant creativity and the heart- touching sentiments of a romance well told. Good job!

your best oneshot yet.

I loved this story!

Loved it! Not too much fluff and I absolutely adore stories that involved understanding Ron/Harry. I great peak into what kind of people they might grow to be. Brilliant!