Short and a decent moral. I like how you characterized the old man with his speech pattern. It made him more real.

Sad ending, but that's how ALL of my skifree games ended, I think.

PFT

So touching...so tragic...

bravo.

I'm gonna go play SkiFree now *sniffle*

awsome. But i was confused at the end did te abamidable snowman get her or what. you didnt really explain it. i would like to know so could you post it in the rviews because i cannot give you my email.

*gasp*
Oh, that was awful! Poor old guy! Poor girl! I dunno which is sadder - the story, or the fact that I'm so touched by it!

;_; :( That's so sad...

Wow that was disturbingly depressing. Good, but depressing.

Damn the was funny!

heh. Pretty good. It was pretty well written and I enjoyed it but, yes, it was pretty depressing.

SkiFree fan fiction... i wasn't expecting that!

A sad little tale, which makes you think. I like it! Trying to live for others is a noble goal, but a lot more difficult than it sounds. A good moral to present though. And ignore closed minded people who cant see that a persons religion doesn't make a person.

Good stuff!

Wow...deep.

However, the bloody leg thing makes me smile, because it's so out of style with the rest of it.

I actually found this hilarious.I may have mentioned that I laugh at the stupidest 's idea if this is supposed to be funny,but I couldn't stop laughing o_O

Thnx for reviewing another one of my poems :)

This is Neeup, I would just like to point out that, in ski free, he (or she) did not have enough time to think the thoughts the character in your fic was thinking. The abomidabal snowman ran up and ate the main person very quickly, perhaps 2 seconds, or maybe even less. Your story wasnt bad, I just felt it appropriate to point that out, you also didnt mention the dance the snowman did after eating the main character, another flaw to an otherwise decent tale.

Oh no! that's so sad. I never knew that monster killed such a wonderful person. THat's it, I'm going to play that game one more time just so I can bash it's head in.

Ok, thank you for the criticism! I'm glad you liked it, and I'll work on that "girl" thing next time I feel like writing something like this again (which prob. won't be for a while, considering some of the really stinky reviews on this...) But at least YOU were nice about it! And to all those other people who wrote insane stuff about hamsters and whatnot (I HATE HAMSTERS; curse them too) I appreciate the insanity and ALWAYS STAY INSANE! NEVER GIVE IN TO THE DARK SIDE OF RATIONALITY AND SANENESS! (hehe... uh... O_o;;) I'm done now. n e waze, t/y all! _