KILLER! Why do you always kill people?

AW! You killed WAYAN? How could you? Oh man, and this is such a good story too! I actually retract the remark about it being rushed after reading it a second time. Update soon please, I'm interested to see what happens next.

Ooh, nice finishing line. :D

I hope all the evacuees know where to go . . . ? XD

I get the feeling Mahad might be in for a lecture later. Unless it's like one of those Latter Day church ads and Cortes is going to tell him how proud he is of him for 'fessing up? :P

fantastic

Wow. Awesome beginning to a story. I can't wait to read more! The only non-praise comment I have is that it was a little rushed...but this looks like its going to be another great story!

Just amazing!!
Great how Cortes wants to stay behind to save Puerto Angel altough he don't have a change.
Really an amzing fanfic!!

I hope there are gone to be more parts ^^