Awww, so sweet! I love it! No complaints at all - good writing style, good characterisation, an excellentt job in capturing emotions.

Everything that is great happens when one dances. :) I can clearly see the picture you described. It’s really sweet.

This made me all tingly inside:) Then again, all angst, fluff, angst-gone-fluffy, fluff-gone-angst makes me tingly and sometimes makes me wanna cry, although the crying may not happen often, depending. But this was good! And to me, this is considered 'fluff with a hint of angst' ;) So very well done!

cute! luvd it!

This is Outsiderslvr/doeboymomma's daughter reviewing here. I just wanted to say that your writing is wonderful and your grammar is quite good. I am a big Tiva fan and I will atleast attempt to review more of your work. Good job.

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aw!cute!*squeels*:)

I've read this about 10 times now and I absolutely love it. Very sweet, but not particularly sappy. Just right. :)

I liked it.:))

Okay, I loved this one too! so sweet and innocent!

AW! in my mind i can see abby and mcgee looking at them with little knowing smiles... haha.

very very cute :)

perfect. :) they need more sweet scenes like this!

that was nice, short, and seet. i liked it. you can really paint a picture. i could imagine the scene play out in front of me. good job!

A great story. Very good.

Aw, that was so sweet!

I love it, but I think you could've gone on. It seems like it shouldn't end there...if you know what I mean.

Great work!

MM