GT SUCKS! but in a story that is as good as this one is so far, i dont really mind it. :)

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i cant wait till the next chapter. i now im prolly sounding ungrateful but im glad this story is slowly being updated.

a short chapter thats goes that little bit further just when u think it cant get worse. (for the characters)
or maybe my emotions are too sensitive. what ever the case, I WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER!!

WHYA CANT I STOP READING THIS?!? ARRGH!
even if it is just fictional characters, i always get torn apart wen i see people suffer. and not from just regular antagonists that are supposed to be there so the story doesnt get boring, but antagonists that are just over-the-top monsters.

!8's question near the end of this chapter made me rofl hardcore. i remember that scene. i also remember thinking "OMGWTFBBQ!" wen i first saw it.

Sorry, but I'm too lazy to log in, and my computer is way too slow to go through all the excessive clicking so...

Anyway, great chapter! Sad, but great! And the end is coming soon, you say? I can't wait.

Wow this story really got me interested cant wait to see wat happens

Aw...so sad...
Poor 18, poor Krillin...
I hope Brandon gets what's coming to him, and 18 should get the biggest share of the **-kicking!
Update soon!

Aw! That chapter was so sad! T_T Please continue soon I can't wait to find out what happens!

That just tore me to pieces. It's not that I don't love the story...BUT IT'S SO SAD. :[ Thanks for updating.

I really love this story...just promise me a happy ending. :] I love.

I'm thoroughly enjoying this story! It's so imaginative and well written- I'm always on the edge of my seat! Please update soon! :)

Hey, quick head's up: You need to change your character category. See, the admin decided to split all the Androids from Androids 16-19 into each individual Android. But by default, all previous Android category markers are now Android 16. You MAY wanna change that to 18 and spread the word, too...

Still loving the story, but I can't take the suspense. o.O Can't wait for 18's mom to meet Roshi and Oolong...

I'm really enjoying the story. Great Job. Though you should finish it please (for the readers/fans)=)