Bwahahaha! XD Crafty woman. Aww, she's never gonna grow out of that motherly nature of hers, is she? It's sweet in a way... and embarrassing in another. XD

Aww! Mac/Goo wuv! :3 I love it. Lol.

Well, it's been a pleasure reading all of your fics. They certainly made my life just that little bit zanier XD and everyone needs a bit more zaniness in their life, right?

You know, I could never read a large portion of your fics in one go. There's just too much craziness going on, both in the actions AND in the dialogue... but I have now finally read them all! ^^ I feel pleased with myself... yet rather sad that there are no more.

Ah well. Sayonara, Dude-kun!

ravengal out x

LOL. This was an interesting one-shot. Showing the readers the events leading up to birth of Bridgett.

Jesus, man, Frankie is a freaking PSYCHO. I hope for Rudy's sake that she never gets pregnant again.

(Haha, I see you covering your mistake of Bloo mysteriously disappearing by having him try to find the vending machines. XD Don't worry, we all forget to include characters one time or another.)

Anyway, I realised something last night about their little family: their eye and hair colours match.

Rudy - brown hair and brown eyes
Frankie - red hair and green eyes
Mac - brown hair and brown eyes
Bridgett - red hair and green eyes

Did you do that on purpose? :P

Anyway, something's bugging me. I was curious as to what Rudy's surname was... but in this one-shot, you said that Frankie was caled "Mrs. Foster". Does that mean that, by some strange coincidence, Rudy's surname is "Foster" too? XD

In the present day of this fic, Rudy and Frankie are 28, right? And Mac and Goo are 14?

If this is true, then, in the flashback, Rudy and Frankie were 25, while Mac and Goo were 11. God, this is confusing. Lol.

Then if that's true, Rudy and Frankie would be 27 in "As Usual", while Mac and Goo would be 13... or roundabouts, anyway.

Just one more one-shot to go! Aww.

(Will you be writing again in the future? If you don't want to continue THIS series anymore, then you could always start a brand new series for a different show. *bats eyelashes*)

ravengal out x

Mmkay XD you're making fun of your own style again, I see.

I can't believe that was an act. XD she really had me going there. Poor Mr. H. XP

Yes, she IS shamelessly maternal in your fics. XD She gives Mac way too many hugs, kisses and tickle fights. (Plus how many times have you mentioned her maternal instinct kicking in, as though it's some sort of deadly weapon or something. XD)

There were about a few big spelling mistakes in this one. I knew what you were trying to say in each case, but they didn't say what you wanted them to say. The greatest example was "Once she had some idea aboutt eh kind og guardian that the rabbit was now apparently expecting to be". Yeah. I'm sure you see what I mean.

ravengal out x

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Aww. Madame F reminds me of MY Grandma. She asks you to get her something, thens asks when she gets it "Where's this from?"... or gives you the money to buy her something, then gives you the money again later, claiming that she hasn't paid for it yet. XP

I actually choked in laughter when Bloo said "All you do is yell at me for not listening to you, and the one time I do as you ask, you STILL yell at me?" XD OMG, he actually tried to kill Frankie.

Man, that was one tough workout. I'll be keeping an eye on Segways from now on. Who knew they could be used as dangerous weapons. *glances around suspiciously*

ravengal out x

Haha. XD (How many times am I gonna write that?)

Ew. *flinches in disgust* I wouldn't DARE to dare anyone to eat... THAT thing. I'd feel immensely guilty when they got bad stomach aches and couldn't stop throwing up. (Besides, I'd probably throw up myself just by WATCHING them eat it.)

Oh, God. XD Frankie's such a bad role model. Here I was, thinking she threw the sandwich at Mr. H for money, then you go and tell me that she did it simply coz she WANTED to. XD I swear, that woman's getting worse.

ravengal out x

Haha. XD

God. Your one-shots are wacky. This shouldn't surprise me anymore, but you're always throwing new little surises at me. A crab in Frankie's bathing suit? Wilt *reaching in* there and fishing it out? XD My God.

"Oh come on... she heard fair and square earlier that she had to fear my terrible wrath..." I loved that line. X3 Bloo as a Sea-Beast is awesome.

Aww, now Frankie is paranoid about attacks from beach creatures. XD Poor thing.

I thought the crab was originally going to be a jellyfish. DX Those things are notorious. I got stung by one once. It gave me a nasty rash on my arm that both itched and burned at the same time. My cousin got it too, but (while I was complaining) he was toughing it out. XD I bet it hurt him just as much, though.

ravengal out x

Hahaha. XD I really enjpyed this one-shot. It had drunkeness, innuendoes AND Rudy/Frankie fluff. X3

The first half was just toally exhausting with Frankie doing nothing but trying desperately to get home. Poor Rudy. XD I hope Frankie never gets drunk again, for HIS sake.

The second half was utter cuteness. Frankie being a caring guardian, even while drunk... Frankie playing with Mac, Goo and Bloo (I forgot the name of the game, but I remember playing it when I was little. It's a very fun game)... and Frankie sticking up for Rudy. XD Aww, Rudy's such a lickle wimp. X3 But he's likable... and he really cares about Frankie.

ravengal out x

Haha. XD Interesting concept. Mac sleepwalking after eating a cheap sweetener.

It was funny when he ended up at Goo's house. XD Though I'm not even gonna tell you what I originally thought he was doing when Goo said "He wants to play... At least, that's what I think he's doing." XD

Aww, in a way it was kind of Mac/Goo fluff. X3

It was also funny when he dove off the fridge. XD That was a total "WTF!" moment.

I can imagie how stupid Franie and Mac must have looked at the end there. XD Poor Mac. That must be really embarrassing for him.

ravengal out x

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Poor Cheese... although it's good that his imprisonment didn't bother him at all. XD He has a brick for a brain, that imaginary friend.

Also, shouldn't the number in his song have gone down to thirty-four cats, rather than staying at thirty-five? ... Although, saying that, this IS Cheese we're talking about.

Tut tut, Frankie... disobeying Mr. H, then lying about it. BAD role model! XP

ravengal out x

Haha. XD

That was quite cool, Goo being all alone and terrified... then both Mac AND Bloo getting pummelled while trying to enter her house. XD

ravengal out x

Tsk. XD

I'm a bit speechless, but I'll try to voice my thoughts on this one.

It was kind of amusing watching Mac and Frankie struggle with their bladder problems XD but kind of over-the-top, as usual.

Aww, Madame F. XD You're picking on her again... though it was kinda funny how she KNEW how overly disgusted they'd be about the thought of her wearing Frankie's bikini. X)

One thing does bug me, though. If two people were glued at the wrists, ran in opposite directions and ripped themselves apart... it'd be almost certain that they'd rip quite a lot of skin off. It would be VERY painful.

ravengal out x

Haha. XD Kathy/Frankie. The idea of it never occured to me before, but it sounds kinda cute.

... Uh-oh. Frankie's glaring murderously at me through the computer. I must end this review before she decides to rev up that chainsaw she's holding and use it on me...

ravengal out x

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XD

I have little else to say to this one-shot.

Bloo with his wasps. Tsk. The idiot. (I actually thought they were imaginary wasps at first. Lol.)

Then Bloo with his rats. XD

Then Bloo with his dead bird. Ew. XD

God, if Bloo showed Coco a dead bird, she'd probably freak. I mean, she IS part bird, so... she might see it as losing a family member or something... and feel traumatized that Bloo was finding amusement in showing it off. She's crazy in the head, so it's possible. Lol.

Oh and I actually felt my adrenaline racing a bit when I was reading the chase scene with the wasps. XD That was pretty cool.

(You do go overboard a bit with descriptions, though, so it does slow down the potential action somewhat. Lol.)

ravengal out x

Haha. XD Aw, no, not this problem again. Another rnadom person assuming Frankie is Mac's mother. XP

I enjoyed watching Frankie explode at the teacher, then scream into her sweater. XD And her new "stress ball routine" was interesting to read about.

Near the end there, Mac called Frankie "Frankie, dear". I'm assuming it was originally Madame Foster who greeted Frankie when she came home and you forgot to alter that? Lol.

ravengal out x

So now I offically ship Frankie/Kathy, along with Mac/Goo. I know. I'm weird.