lol aw so cute that chap was !

lol cute story ideas hope you keep writing more of them D

Wow i can't believe Frankie is pregnant with Rudy's child and suddenly she just had her pregnancy for 4 months and now she is 6 months before her newborn child was arrive and she said that she find out that she is having a baby girl. And as Kathy helped her calm down as before she had contractions. Even though it wasn't a whilebut so then Frankie goes into labor and she finally gave birth to her daughter and i really like that story. Oh my god that is a story oh I wish I could write a story on my laptop. What do you think guys?

Wow i can't believe Frankie is pregnant with Rudy's child and suddenly she just had her pregnancy for 4 months and now she is 6 months before her newborn child was arrive and she said that she find out that she is having a baby girl. And as Kathy helped her calm down as before she had contractions. Even though it wasn't a whilebut so then Frankie goes into labor and she finally gave birth to her daughter and i really like that story. Oh my god that is a story oh I wish I could write a story on my laptop. What do you think guys?

Wow i can't believe Frankie is pregnant with Rudy's child and suddenly she had her pregnancy for 4 months she said she found out that she is having a baby girl. As Kathy helped her calm down as she had contractions but when Frankie goes into labor she finally gives birth to her daughter and i like that story. what do you think guys?

Oh, man, now I'm going to cry for real! (It doesn't help that I binge-read your big drama stories this past week. They're still incredible.) I guess I was wrong in "As usual": this was a better way to end the series. Then again, it never truly ends, does it? In this particular chapter, you brought the core of your characters (sans Wilt, strangely) together for a heartfelt finale. It was a beautifully written trip down memory lane.

BTW, yes. I said "your" characters. What in 2005 started with a simple idea/ experiment for a FHFIF fic ended as one of the most wonderful original stories I've read. Again I say, there's probably nothing else of FFdN that I'd enjoy on so many levels as this. In fact, to think that it's truly over now... Man, I cotta compose myself! Dude, you have a real gift, and if you ever write up an original book, I am so buying and reading it. (Just make sure you give us something to figure out it's you.)

From an aspiring writer to another, I have nothing else to say to you, except:

BRAVISSIMO!

I wanted to wait until I finished the stories, but I felt I needed to review right here. As far as your "rejected stories go, while funny as always, I can see why they weren't used before. Bloo actively trying to hurt/maim Frankie? Kathy holding the idiot ball and suddely forgetting she was Frankie's case worker? Bloo getting worked up over nationalities? (Wait, that one's actually on-character for Bloo.) Somehow, a couple of these stories seem far-fetched, even within the MTMF-verse or fandom in general. With the exception of this very chapter, they definitely felt unpolished both grammatically and contextually.

Now, this chapter, however, showed more dedication, almost as if you were just starting to develop a whole slew of new stories from this. (Mac learning to drive? Bridgett's first day in school? Mac's dating woes? Frankie & Rudy's relationship?) I particularly enjoyed how you portrayed Bridgett, that cutie. She reminded me of my little niece (just as curious, whiny, clingy and adorable). I loved it, and seriously. There's not much more I can say of the rest of the story that I haven't said before. Heartfelt, funny, fantastic, and with soul to boot.

Oh, and sorry I reviewd so firckin' late. I guess I lurked even less than I expected. I hope this still reaches you.

Bwahahaha! XD Crafty woman. Aww, she's never gonna grow out of that motherly nature of hers, is she? It's sweet in a way... and embarrassing in another. XD

Aww! Mac/Goo wuv! :3 I love it. Lol.

Well, it's been a pleasure reading all of your fics. They certainly made my life just that little bit zanier XD and everyone needs a bit more zaniness in their life, right?

You know, I could never read a large portion of your fics in one go. There's just too much craziness going on, both in the actions AND in the dialogue... but I have now finally read them all! I feel pleased with myself... yet rather sad that there are no more.

Ah well. Sayonara, Dude-kun!

ravengal out x

LOL. This was an interesting one-shot. Showing the readers the events leading up to birth of Bridgett.

Jesus, man, Frankie is a freaking PSYCHO. I hope for Rudy's sake that she never gets pregnant again.

(Haha, I see you covering your mistake of Bloo mysteriously disappearing by having him try to find the vending machines. XD Don't worry, we all forget to include characters one time or another.)

Anyway, I realised something last night about their little family: their eye and hair colours match.

Rudy - brown hair and brown eyes

Frankie - red hair and green eyes

Mac - brown hair and brown eyes

Bridgett - red hair and green eyes

Did you do that on purpose? :P

Anyway, something's bugging me. I was curious as to what Rudy's surname was... but in this one-shot, you said that Frankie was caled "Mrs. Foster". Does that mean that, by some strange coincidence, Rudy's surname is "Foster" too? XD

In the present day of this fic, Rudy and Frankie are 28, right? And Mac and Goo are 14?

If this is true, then, in the flashback, Rudy and Frankie were 25, while Mac and Goo were 11. God, this is confusing. Lol.

Then if that's true, Rudy and Frankie would be 27 in "As Usual", while Mac and Goo would be 13... or roundabouts, anyway.

Just one more one-shot to go! Aww.

(Will you be writing again in the future? If you don't want to continue THIS series anymore, then you could always start a brand new series for a different show. *bats eyelashes*)

ravengal out x

Mmkay XD you're making fun of your own style again, I see.

I can't believe that was an act. XD she really had me going there. Poor Mr. H. XP

Yes, she IS shamelessly maternal in your fics. XD She gives Mac way too many hugs, kisses and tickle fights. (Plus how many times have you mentioned her maternal instinct kicking in, as though it's some sort of deadly weapon or something. XD)

There were about a few big spelling mistakes in this one. I knew what you were trying to say in each case, but they didn't say what you wanted them to say. The greatest example was "Once she had some idea aboutt eh kind og guardian that the rabbit was now apparently expecting to be". Yeah. I'm sure you see what I mean.

ravengal out x

XD

Aww. Madame F reminds me of MY Grandma. She asks you to get her something, thens asks when she gets it "Where's this from?"... or gives you the money to buy her something, then gives you the money again later, claiming that she hasn't paid for it yet. XP

I actually choked in laughter when Bloo said "All you do is yell at me for not listening to you, and the one time I do as you ask, you STILL yell at me?" XD OMG, he actually tried to kill Frankie.

Man, that was one tough workout. I'll be keeping an eye on Segways from now on. Who knew they could be used as dangerous weapons. *glances around suspiciously*

ravengal out x

Haha. XD (How many times am I gonna write that?)

Ew. *flinches in disgust* I wouldn't DARE to dare anyone to eat... THAT thing. I'd feel immensely guilty when they got bad stomach aches and couldn't stop throwing up. (Besides, I'd probably throw up myself just by WATCHING them eat it.)

Oh, God. XD Frankie's such a bad role model. Here I was, thinking she threw the sandwich at Mr. H for money, then you go and tell me that she did it simply coz she WANTED to. XD I swear, that woman's getting worse.

ravengal out x

Haha. XD

God. Your one-shots are wacky. This shouldn't surprise me anymore, but you're always throwing new little surises at me. A crab in Frankie's bathing suit? Wilt *reaching in* there and fishing it out? XD My God.

"Oh come on... she heard fair and square earlier that she had to fear my terrible wrath..." I loved that line. X3 Bloo as a Sea-Beast is awesome.

Aww, now Frankie is paranoid about attacks from beach creatures. XD Poor thing.

I thought the crab was originally going to be a jellyfish. DX Those things are notorious. I got stung by one once. It gave me a nasty rash on my arm that both itched and burned at the same time. My cousin got it too, but (while I was complaining) he was toughing it out. XD I bet it hurt him just as much, though.

ravengal out x

Hahaha. XD I really enjpyed this one-shot. It had drunkeness, innuendoes AND Rudy/Frankie fluff. X3

The first half was just toally exhausting with Frankie doing nothing but trying desperately to get home. Poor Rudy. XD I hope Frankie never gets drunk again, for HIS sake.

The second half was utter cuteness. Frankie being a caring guardian, even while drunk... Frankie playing with Mac, Goo and Bloo (I forgot the name of the game, but I remember playing it when I was little. It's a very fun game)... and Frankie sticking up for Rudy. XD Aww, Rudy's such a lickle wimp. X3 But he's likable... and he really cares about Frankie.

ravengal out x

Haha. XD Interesting concept. Mac sleepwalking after eating a cheap sweetener.

It was funny when he ended up at Goo's house. XD Though I'm not even gonna tell you what I originally thought he was doing when Goo said "He wants to play... At least, that's what I think he's doing." XD

Aww, in a way it was kind of Mac/Goo fluff. X3

It was also funny when he dove off the fridge. XD That was a total "WTF!" moment.

I can imagie how stupid Franie and Mac must have looked at the end there. XD Poor Mac. That must be really embarrassing for him.

ravengal out x