This is a promising story. The only real problem I can see with it is all the ANs you're putting in the middle of the story. ANs are wonderful, but I think you should put them up top with the disclaimer. It makes for a much better flow and won't irritate the readers when they're trying to get into the story and it's interrupted by an AN from the author trying to explain something.

Again, so far I'm enjoying the story. It has a good plot and the 'pack' seems to genuinely care for each other and they could have a very interesting impact on Harry and how his schooling at Hogwarts will be effected by it.

Like I said, all I really have an issue with are all the ANs in the middle of a sentence. They're very distracting, which is a fallback when writing a good story. If you put them with the disclaimer, I feel you'll have much better feedback from happier readers. I look forward to the rest of the story, so please keep the chapters coming!

Nice chapter.

Amber

I hope that you post soon, this is a really good story. Is harry going to be a badass? POST SOON!

I'm sorry that I was one of those 14! But I really like this story and I loved this chapter! Great job!

Great chapter!

It's nice meeting some of the other characters. Personally, I have a hard time reading their accents, but I get that it makes the characters more real and separates them from every other character. All in all, a great read. I hope that you continue.

Thank you for sharing.

Aww, reading your note I wish he'd be Slytherin, but maybe not...

You're off to a great start and I cant wait to read more!

Moony

i really like this and can't wait to see what comes next.. i'd appreciate a hurry up and write another chapter. *smiles*

hmm very interesting story and chapter will be intersting to see how harry and draco react to ech other. and how the slight change affects harry, ron and hermione!

Interesting beginning.

Amber

YAY! this is going to be great! As long as Harry is not a pushover, i am happy :). :) :) :) :) anyways, Great chapter, i loved the fluff. :)

Please Post Soon :) :) :) :)

-meg :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

and just one more :)

this was good. well written.

AWESOME! but how long till we see and older Harry?

That is the proper use of a semicolon (or at least I think it is). Good chapter, looking forward to more.

Aw! How cute! I love the way you had Harry asking lots of questions! I always pictured Harry askining questions, if he left the Dursleys, I mean.