This was a beautifully written piece, the plot behind this was golden, and its execution was gorgeous, I literally couldn't stop reading as I laid eyes on this amazing work of art. I loved how you made fun of some of the more glaring flaws of the Harry Potter series, and has inspired me to fall in love again with those books.

Thank you!

This is an interesting piece to read, that really makes me want to understand Voldemort/Tom Riddle better.

This is the second time I've read this, and I love it! Harry Potter doing the Shinji Ikari psychodrama thing, but without the angst, and with a fantastic sting in the tail. So logical,and yet so subtle.

Congratulations.

Yet another interesting idea. I would wonder which horcrux was first though, the diary or the ring, in canon. After leaving hogwarts, he wears the ring, while the diary is never seen again. Unless he really was stupid, I doubt he'd make the ring a horcrux and then wear the thing. Other than that, the fact that a sane Tom takes over Volde's body is fun! Not that I think Tom was ever 'sane' or not as racist as he was at the end. Good work!

Well thought out and well written.
Interesting twist at the end.

i LOVED this fic its going on my faves list

I am amused. It does indeed seem like having one seventh of your soul (or 1/(2^7) which is 1/128 if he splits it in half each time) would have some detrimental effects on you in some way.

-demonicnargles

way awesome

This is well thought out. I enjoyed it. Thanks for writing. W.

I love this story. It's a great, unique concept, and I would love to see a sequel.

Liked it!

ps quite a fitting ending with the dispell! don't we all wish it went like this lol

wonderful :D love seeing the plotholes though i personally never wondered past the "wth was he thinking" and "it must be that soul splinting crazyness" part; an enlightening story perspective ;p

nice idea. I would just like to add my own evidence for his insanity. he used a killing curse on a baby! i mean talk about overkill it's a baby they're very fragile to begin with it does not take the most powerful dark spell in existence to take it out! oh well i suppose ten years as a disembodied spirit is enough punishment if only he didn't do the same thing in the goblet of fire to take out a teenager! so yes voldemort is insane or at the very least mind boggling stupid.

Loved the way this ended.

Great job, well done, keep writing.