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JacobB-AnimeLuv
2009-10-11 . chapter 9
Hahahahahhahah! Sasuke going commando! that's hilarious. If only it were Itachi... sigh. But that's just me. And i really love this story. I'm done being a stalker for now! Hope my reviews weren't too annoying. Keep updating dude, we're all waiting. :D
JacobB-AnimeLuv
2009-10-11 . chapter 8
Another unexpected thing. Wow. I like this! Usually it's pretty easy to figure the story out, but this one's different. It almost seems like a series of drabbles, but you can tell it isn't.
JacobB-AnimeLuv
2009-10-11 . chapter 7
Didn't see that coming. The whole Team 7 deal is pretty damn cool though! Are you going to include Sai and Yamato? I hope you get Sai in there somewhere. :)
JacobB-AnimeLuv
2009-10-11 . chapter 6
Heheheehhe, this is decidedly cutesy. I love it. Sasuke sure is upset that she won't make enough money.
JacobB-AnimeLuv
2009-10-11 . chapter 5
Makes me curious... Will Sakura try hard to get an explanation for the marks?
JacobB-AnimeLuv
2009-10-11 . chapter 4
Really short, but worth it. It gets the interaction really well. Can Naruto do something that will embarrass Sasuke AND Sakura? It'd be even better if they double teamed to get them back!
JacobB-AnimeLuv
2009-10-11 . chapter 3
Okay... i get confused easily. I thought that they were just giving her a cheap flat to stay in... not asking her to move in with them. Wow, i need to pay better attention when i read. Rawr. It'll be a lot more interesting since they're living together though. What language is Les Rois?
JacobB-AnimeLuv
2009-10-11 . chapter 2
I don't know why, but i really just feel like reviewing every chapter in this story. weird huh? If Naruto's a business or law major, then wouldn't he be expected to dress better for class? Well... i'm not in college yet, so i have no idea... but i was just wondering. The only grammar mistake is when you put the period instead of the comma in the... i can't find it now, but i saw it. But again, nice story! I like your writing style. XD
JacobB-AnimeLuv
2009-10-11 . chapter 1
:) i really, really liked it! I mean, i guess i only read one chapter but i still like it so far. Naruto and Sasuke make interesting bad asses. One thing i wanna say (this'll sound like sucking up but isn't) i think you have great grammar skills, most people don't, so i loved reading it.
kenni no. 1
2009-09-27 . chapter 9
thank you for updating. looking forward to when kakashi is added into the mix.
kenni
Triste1
2009-09-26 . chapter 9
Hahahaha! "I dont wear underwear" followed by butt-twitch. I swear to all that is good and right with the world, this fic rocks. It's like a breath of fresh air, going into all sorts of genres and fitting right in. Sentimental, nostalgic, tender and sweet, humorous and ridiculous, and somewhat befuddling. I love it. By the way, if you'd like to use it, the phrase for three kings in Bahasa Melayu roughly translates to "Tiga Orang Raja" .
Maelie
2009-09-24 . chapter 9
:D that was worth the wait. As funny as ever.
roxxihearts
2009-09-23 . chapter 9
*sniggers* If I were her I wouldve looked a bit closer if you catch my drift xD

sweet update! nauhty Sasuke hahahaha ;D
LittleFoxDemon
2009-09-23 . chapter 9
Yay, my language. =]
Anyway, awesome chapter. =]

~Fox~
SerenityFrogLuvr3
2009-09-23 . chapter 9
O man, I love love LOVE this story! I'm so happy there's an update, I was afraid you had abandoned it :( but now everything is right in the world ^_^ But I have a question- a few chapters back you said you were going to bring Kakashi in to live with them- is that still happening?
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