The story is too beautiful for words. Heartbreaking too; I can't remember the last time I teared up over a fic (but then, that might be my shitty memory at work).

Excuse me while I ponder (read:cry) on the story some more.

Fuck.
I cry every time I read this. So amazingly written. So heart-wrenchingly tragic and beautiful.
Thank you for sharing this with all of us.

Absolutely gorgeous. From start to finish, I was constantly choked up (and that barely ever happens when reading fic - I'm fairly shocked!). Very very touching, and I'm so glad Yamamoto was there in the end!
Em x

Realistic. Too realistic for comfort. Things I don't want to remember and things I never want to forget; this fic touched me deeply.

This is really beautiful, it made me cry...

~Sora

As a person who had someone close to her suffer by lung cancer, this story had me in tears for the most part (dang, I really shouldn't cry so easily though). It really does seem that Gokudera would be the type to hide himself away from everyone else, if he knew that he was suffering from as such. The ending was very beautiful as well.

I'm honestly shocked this fic hasn't gotten more reviews. I think it's beautiful, I was tearing up myself. DX It's really unique too as you really don't see many written in the second person. The sense of loss and fear of death was really profound but it really didn't get me tell the poem at the very end.

Beautiful and heartbreaking.

You've used the... well, second person view point very well in this story, with a quite possible conclusion to Gokudera's life. I also really enjoyed the way you showed us all the way through the cancer treatment rather than skipping to the ending death scene, it makes the story so much more melancholy yet fuller.

Thank you for the wonderful fanfiction

Wow, simply wow. This story made my eyes brim up with tears. Its so wonderfully written, and despite being sad, it is still warming.. somehow. Maybe it was the quotes at the end; that really brought it home for me. All in all very good story, one of the best I've read.

8059 forever!!

Oh... my god. I've never had a fanfiction make me cry. Never. This was so breathtaking... and so horribly sad. Oh geez; my chest feels tight. Wow. Just... wow. I don't know how on earth anyone could manage to pull this off so beautifully, but you did.
AND you used second person not only correctly, but well [which is so hard to find; so many people just mess it up]
This was really unbelieveably amazing.
Amazingly done.

I knew something like this was going to happen when I started reading. T.T But you know it made me think of Mukurou and Chrome and then I went somewhere truly dark, Mukurou/Gokudera. Wouldn't that be interesting? I think I've been inspired by this fic! <3 It was great and sad and it made me feel bad.

T^T *sniff* *sniff*

TT_TT Wah! So sad! D:
I think anyone who reads this story/fic would not want to smoke, or stop smoking. *still crying.
~aisu-sakura
P.S: In regards to your writing, I'm speechless.

oh my god, even as i'm writing this review, i'm crying. this was so well written and the flow of the story was perfect and oh so emotional. i'm glad i read this.

i was trying really hard to hold my tears back since i have to go to class soon, but i started crying anyway towards the end, especially when i read the parts that described gokudera last moments with yamamoto. i love your writing style and you wrote the angst well. living is truly a valuable thing; you have convinced me to stop smoking :)