I have not laughed so hard at a fic, a fave, an alert and free internets goes to you Corny. Brock's character in this = awesomeness

Good second chapter! I'm kinda surprised you went back to this story, but whatever.

just amazing i love this... so... just so *out of word and awaiting update*

0.o it'sa... epic

Hm... Interesting. I don't know where it's leading but i'm curious. This is a parody right?

Dude, dude, dude. This is amazing. As of right now, this has the potential to become something amazing.

Brock's personality in this > all. Hands down that this is what he should have been (should be?) like. Pikachu is cool, and Ash actually acts normal. Team Rocket are badasses. I'll wait to see Misty's personality - I can guess what she'll be like, considering your other works; if so, I'll love this even more.

Keep it up.

Uhh... lol?

You would do something like this. I want to see more soon.

coughIusedtobeafanofthisshowcough

Yay!

Ketchem? Catch 'em? Holy shit, I finally get that. I feel so lame for not realizing that for so long.

But yeah, Ash wants to be the very best that no one ever was. But utterly fails in the end. Pathetic.

You can be such a loser sometimes, Corny. That's why you're awesome. Well, not really, but you get the idea.

This was a curveball, coming from you. I lol'd.

Ooh, how interesting and suspenseful! ^ ^
I like the style.
Your punctuation is lacking in some places, but it's much better than some of the stuff I've seen.
I wonder... the storyline seems deeper than it is on the surface. (That's a good thing.) I might be reading into it too much, though. Perhaps it's just a remake of the original Pokemon story...

O_O Well, that certainly is an original take on the first epi of Pokemon. Though I gotta admit, it J and J were this proactive in their activities, they probably would have been a much more serious threat to the twerp patrol.

You went ahead and did the story, you.

Now I feel some steps behind.

i like it so far, and then- cliffhanger making me want more

Awesome. Worth time reading it!