LOTS of typos. Would benefit from betas.

Strange story overall. Or I should say strange piece of writing, as there wasn't really a story...just a couple of events with no meaning or resolution or character development. It was unclear whether you were trying to portray Cam/Chase as positive, functional relationship or the exact opposite.

Not sure the point of it at all. it's a fragment of a story, there is no plot. Characters other than Cameron came off very flat and empty.

Sorry if that's too negative, but you did ask for reviews. Better luck next time. Try to imagine a beginning, middle, and end to your next story, and maybe a purpose to it all. Get someone to proofread it maybe - for spelling errors as well as content.

omg I LOVED it! AWESOME!
Liv

aw, I love how at the end they make up! really cute. it shows how much they mean to each other because they fight hard to make it work

Hm, I like it.
Especially the "Do I look like a lesbian?" Line.
xD

Those fics do bother me a bit too...
As for the "Cameron has turned bisexual without telling anyone, or even herself, and this is perfectly normally." It was never stated outright that she is straight. It's obviously assumed, but for all we know she could just be realy deep in the closet. ;)
There's something to be said for curiosity, or desperation, confusion, despair, etc.

Also, I believe humans are bisexual by nature; we desire to be loved, and will take what we can get. Some people are pickier than other about where said love comes from, but others aren't. If she was upset enough, who knows what could happen.

Rambling aside, I really enjoyed your story. It was well written, and pretty humorous. =]

i liked it

loved it. you've got the characters down so when you do introduce a plot like this, it works =)

Aww! Yay! Happy ending!

=)

Yep,she's gay.