|Reviews for The Untypical Duo of Hyotei|
| asobi seksu 2/11/09 . chapter 2
Truthfully, I don't like it very much. It's not very realistic, starting from the archery-slash-woodworking courses (even in America, the archery courses are not common as athletic electives) to blackmailing Oshitari.
I guess I haven't seen the girls develop much, so I'll be reading more. Reluctantly.
| XxMichyBabyxX 2/4/09 . chapter 2
Unlike the last reviewer, I think the whole Arrow-through-dummy-saving-Atobe was pretty cool. It's anime, I've seen much weirder happen. Trust me.
I think you should leave it that way, It's pretty awesome. :] Anyway, Write soon so I can read more!
| kuroikuu 2/3/09 . chapter 2
I see the 'senior' is still there, which I still think is really, really, really odd. And Atobe does seem in character, for I still believe -more like a theory- that if he says 'Ore-sama' once in each sentence when he 'arrogantly' speaks, he's not out of character at all. Though Shiroi doesn't openly agree with me, since she claims Atobe is more than the egotistical self-absorbed diva. And I can't believe that I'm actually reading this, I'm not really a fan of Atobe or Oshitari, but being under the same roof with Shiroi -whom btw is totally obsessed with them- perked my interest to read something of them. You're the lucky winner, I guess.
And a few questions about the story: If Atobe was in the tennis courts, Junko was in the archery, and Riko was somewhere(i don't remember), How is that the dummy and the arrow ended up in the tennis courts? Also, is her kick that 'powerful' that it was able to send a dummy flying when she wasn't able to master the kick in the first place? And, how could it be that by many arrows it made a whole and the arrow went through? It IS strange and NOT believable.
| XxMichyBabyxX 1/29/09 . chapter 1
Aw, this is good. When are you going to update?
:) I hope it's soon!
| Amber 1/28/09 . chapter 1
I agree with Kuroi and Shiroi, i rekon putting 'senior' and 'junior' in instead of sempai and kouhai is a little strange...since it IS a japanese custom afterall...but this is a pretty interesting story, keep writing!
| Vannie.2010 1/28/09 . chapter 1
I like your story. It's interesting.
| kuroikuu 1/26/09 . chapter 1
yeah, it was weird seeing senior in front of oshitari... i personally prefer: 'Name-senpai'... at first glance they don't seem marysue-ish, but i would actually like to know more about them, their past?, why they work?, etc... just don't make their past so typical of a mary sue... and, oshitari was completely out of character, he for one wouldn't be ashamed of liking romance movies and novels.
having said that, i wonder who and who will end up together, will atobe appear next chapter?