Oh my. I forgot to review!! Well, I've read this more times than I can count and it never gets old! Its so cute! And Snape was captured perfectly even if he barely said anything!! I also just love the way you make your OC's they're always easy to imagine without a lengthy description!! Keep writing please! And (specifically The Longest Day) keep updating! And if I haven't already said this you're a magnificent writer!

Oh my goodness. I adore Allie. The most touching moment, to me at least, was the grief Severus displayed at the sight of the lemon drops. I can only imagine his pain at the remembrance of Dumbledore, whom he loved enough to help from this world in a dignified manner, but whose loss he carries with remorse and guilt. The little touches, like Allie leaning in to Elizabeth's touch, make this so sweet. I remember the movie you sent me the link for, and I saw that playing in my head as I read. I assume Jimmy is Jimmy Potter? Ah, I've missed reading your writing! Thank you for trusting me with this. I am so honored.

Oh. This is so very sweet. Severus is clearly ill himself, but has less strength to fight it off. Elizabeth doesn't know it, but she's been paid a huge compliment of trust from him--no matter how ill he was, he would never sleep around a stranger.

Yes, Snape's voice would have been destroyed if he had survived Nagini, wouldn't it? Good start, enjoyed it a lot.

I absolutely loved this story!! I thought it was exceptionally cute! Great job! :-)

Oh this was just adorable - exactly what I needed tonight! Thank you so much for sharing this story - I love it, and your writing style is absolutely beautiful!

Have a good evening :-)

What an absolute wonderful chapter!! I love it, and of course I'm interested in the video!!

I don't know if that's possible, but could you perhaps post both together on livejournal (hp-sickfic page or so?)? Sorry, if that's a completely stupid idea, I don't know if it's possible.

A fantastic story, and I'm looking forward to reading chapter 2 :-) Thank you!

This... was really nice. And the passages from Thumbelina were a perfect illustration of Elizabeth and the Snapes--they should be happy together, but she doesn't even know just what different worlds they live in, and I like the story better with it being one person's glimpse into two stranger's lives, and seeing how complete it is. This was just... excellent. Excellently written. Excellent story. If this is how well you do H/C, why bother trying to write anything else unless you want to?

Oh my god, I can't tell you how much I love your story. It is so sweet! And your writing style is breathatking. I wish I could write like this in English!

Oh, my god, that was so sweet. I can't wait for more! Please update soon!