|Reviews for The Red Line|
| Peelmeagrapenyc 11/3/12 . chapter 13
Your A/Ns a wonderful character insights! V is not so different than any difficult boss. She is just more blatant. (Can C&E die in a plan crash and E inherit all their $)
| PeelmeagrapeNYC 11/3/12 . chapter 12
Poor Duckie lips. But he cant be a whore forever, he'll be too old after a while, what's the long term plan?
| PeelmeagrapeNYC 11/2/12 . chapter 11
Tell me, tell me now!
| PeelmeagrapeNYC 11/2/12 . chapter 10
James is the least of her problems...Victoria?!
| PeelmeagrapeNYC 11/2/12 . chapter 9
Things are going to get bad. There's no way out for them, is there?
| PeelmeagrapeNYC 11/2/12 . chapter 8
I can't imagine how the 1st 'pizza delivery' took place? That's a lot of trust to have in someone. OK, fair warning, Raven is a sadistc bitch, got it. I noticed the hospital bill ref.
| PeelmeagrapeNYC 11/2/12 . chapter 7
Love the reaction to the do you..." Question.
| Guest 11/2/12 . chapter 6
Does he have a child he calls daily at 3pm and Sponge Bob is their fav cartoon? Is the girlfriend/Tanya chronically ill and institutionalized and he calls her daily? He needs all this $ to support someone.
| PeelmeagrapeNYC 11/2/12 . chapter 5
Don't apologize for making reference to common knowledge that anyone with a 5th grade education should be familiar with!? Liking it a lot! The NYC refs seem a little off. How soes B afford to live alone in a rather large nyc apt? Scholarships don't cover that. You CANNOT kiss or touch the strippers.
| PeelmeagrapeNYC 11/2/12 . chapter 4
Only private homes run out of hot water, the normal nyc apt building has at least 20 apts and uses steam. Our older buildings are famously over heated a d have strong water pressure. We don't run out of hot water. Wonderful massage.
| PeelmeagrapeNYC 11/2/12 . chapter 3
Even a student practicing being a therapist wouldn't have such an inappropriate relationship with a client!? NO! Her friends don't get to treat him like a thing/slave object either!
| PeelmeagrapeNYC 11/1/12 . chapter 2
Wow, really different take on these characters.
| PeelmeagrapeNYC 11/1/12 . chapter 1
Interesting. Dancers usually cannot be touched beyond tipping, certainly no kissing or biting permitted!?
| bmw140 11/3/12 . chapter 40
Wonderful heart wrenching story! Glad for the HEA, can't wait to red the sequel!
| VenROBsessed 11/1/12 . chapter 10
I know Edward is a whore, but don't let bella same as Edward (easy for doing roleplayer sex)
make it romantic sex :)