Your A/Ns a wonderful character insights! V is not so different than any difficult boss. She is just more blatant. (Can C&E die in a plan crash and E inherit all their $)

Poor Duckie lips. But he cant be a whore forever, he'll be too old after a while, what's the long term plan?

Tell me, tell me now!

James is the least of her problems...Victoria?!

Things are going to get bad. There's no way out for them, is there?

I can't imagine how the 1st 'pizza delivery' took place? That's a lot of trust to have in someone. OK, fair warning, Raven is a sadistc bitch, got it. I noticed the hospital bill ref.

Love the reaction to the do you..." Question.

Does he have a child he calls daily at 3pm and Sponge Bob is their fav cartoon? Is the girlfriend/Tanya chronically ill and institutionalized and he calls her daily? He needs all this $ to support someone.

Don't apologize for making reference to common knowledge that anyone with a 5th grade education should be familiar with!? Liking it a lot! The NYC refs seem a little off. How soes B afford to live alone in a rather large nyc apt? Scholarships don't cover that. You CANNOT kiss or touch the strippers.

Only private homes run out of hot water, the normal nyc apt building has at least 20 apts and uses steam. Our older buildings are famously over heated a d have strong water pressure. We don't run out of hot water. Wonderful massage.

Even a student practicing being a therapist wouldn't have such an inappropriate relationship with a client!? NO! Her friends don't get to treat him like a thing/slave object either!

Wow, really different take on these characters.

Interesting. Dancers usually cannot be touched beyond tipping, certainly no kissing or biting permitted!?

Wonderful heart wrenching story! Glad for the HEA, can't wait to red the sequel!

I know Edward is a whore, but don't let bella same as Edward (easy for doing roleplayer sex)
make it romantic sex :)