|Reviews for The Red Line|
| dolphingirl79 1/28/09 . chapter 3
good story, I have a hard time, on letting Alice and Rosalie, play too, only becouse it has in my head they are his sisters, maybe a dream fantasy or something that could be intresting, keep up the great work.
| forever7twilight 1/28/09 . chapter 3
I cant wait to see where this story is going. I love the plot. No way should Bella let Rose and Alice play with him.
| butterflyKISSU 1/28/09 . chapter 3
Haha, NO! I wouldn't share Edward! If anything, I'd kill the girl who even suggested the outrageous idea! LOL...no, please don't let Alice or Rosalie in on the fun.
Awesome chappie! Update soon!
| mischief-maker1 1/28/09 . chapter 3
I'm an evil bitch. I wouldn't want to share him, but I would want him to share me. LOL. So...I say...maybe? I nunno...no. I don't think she should share him. Rose and Alice need to go back to the club and find Emmett and Jasper and leave poor Eddie alone. Great chapter! I laughed! I teared up for Edward! It was a great mix!
| flecour 1/28/09 . chapter 3
Great Chapter ) I can even begin to explain how anxious I am to see this story unfold. That in no ways means that I want you to rush..just explaining my slight obsession w/ it thus far. lol Oh and there would be no way in hell I would share w/ my friends! Well bc even though I love them MUCHOS, they're whores and that would just be gross. lol I genuinly feel bad for Edward..it almost seems like he has split personalities w/ all the acting he does to keep detached from reality. I cant wait to see the real him! )
| Angels And Airwaves 1/28/09 . chapter 3
don't let edward play with rose and alice.
please please please.
| byhelenahandbasket 1/28/09 . chapter 3
I would vote no on group play time. If Bella is really going for the opposite of being what the other women were, she shouldn't venture there.
You've made Edward a really interesting character and what he's bringing out in Bella is fascinating, too.
| Kaitlin13 1/28/09 . chapter 3
That was a good chapter. It was a little funny too. Can't wait to read more.
| to write home about 1/28/09 . chapter 3
This story is totally and completely fascinating. I'm addicted already. I love your Bella and I love your Edward. I'm not such a huge fan of your Rosalie. Edward is hot as hel, of course, but asking your insecure friend to borrow their hooker is crossing a line. (She could at least wait her turn or chip in for the fee. Pft.) It was a guy they saw at a club, not her ex-boyfriend. Rosalie can chill out. She was being a little fierce the entire time. So I'm kind of hoping Rosalie just gets totally cockblocked on that one lol. It's rare that anything is ever wrong with Alice, and that holds here. Haha.
I really adore how long all your chapters are too. It basically just stokes the addiction that much more lol. You're doing a really great job and I can't wait to see what comes next.
| mercedesfrk1121 1/28/09 . chapter 3
great story so far...really different! dont let them play! hes bellas ONLY!...lol..
| HarryandGinnyeternal 1/28/09 . chapter 3
Hell no. I don't think Bella would like it. I think Edward would be fine with it.
| PINKPUNKGUITAR 1/28/09 . chapter 3
NO! No. Alice and Rosalie should not have any play time with Edward (pouting) that is just wrong he should be all Bella's after all she did give up her inheritance to have him for two weeks. If I were Bella I would lock him up and only let me talk and do other stuff...to him ;). Great chapter. I would like to know Edward's take on finding out though. I like Edward's point of view. Update soon please.
| 858dreaming 1/28/09 . chapter 3
awesome story so far.
and, no. if i were bella, i would not be letting rosalie and alice in on the edward-y goodness.
| courthale 1/28/09 . chapter 3
No, i don't like that idea.
It was weird enough for Rose to be all over him in the club.
Maybe they catch the eyes of Emmett and Jasper instead and make them their own toys.
But i don't like the idea of them passing him around like that.
Bella wouldn't do that.
Can't wait for more
| onelove13 1/28/09 . chapter 3
I like it, and please no sharing! He's all bella's