AW! That was so sad!:(
I would like to read more about this although the ending you gave was brilliant in its simpicity.

Happy Writing!

~Rose Blaze~

Sounds good-those extra 3 chapters as I like the story so far and it seems as if it's only the beginning of something good. You could do and add so much more to this :D

It's good... Really sad though :'[

Wow... that was really lovely and moving depiction of Lady Arabella's emotions after The Key. You really get across her grief and confusion (it isn't quite the right term but it'll have to do) after Lorian's death.
As to whether you should continue, A large part of me is saying: No! Just leave this as it is -- not mess and take away from this scene by risking less good chapters. But, well ulimately it's up to whether you have more story to tell, then you could give it a try... I'm putting it on story alert to wait and see what you decide.

Wow. This is a great depiciton of what Arabella and the others would be feeling. Nicely written and thank god your grammar was flawless; I think it makes it all the more intelligable.
Really thank you for writing this.
I don't know if you should continue. IT's a great piece as it is and if you think you can do it justice in the next chapters then by all means go ahead, but don't do what i did. I had a great piece and dragged it on and now i don't know what to do with it. :(
Thank you againd for posting that. :)