You ended it nicely, your giving up fanfiction? that's a real shame.

Chen Zhen wouldn't be a bad idea, but his diploma with Wu came at a later date after Deng Zhi.

Now I wish Koei could 'fix' ShuHan story in Dynasty Warrors. They have NO idea what they're doing and Ma Liang the most logical choice of the drama in Yi Ling. Just leave Zilong out of it Koei!

I could have sworn, I reviewed this before. I'm not a fan of Shu as a whole. However the individuals are not to blame for the fiasco, thus I enjoy this rendition of Ma Liangs tale.

“NO ONE KNOWS MY PAIN!” Liu Bei screamed upon hearing of Guan Yu's death.

And you didn't know the pain of the Han loyalists whose blood getting spill by the usurper's fraction. Good luck bring your inhertency into ruins Imperial Uncle...

Baimei's life can't end like this =(

Don't trust Wu Ma Liang, its a trap!

I mean seriously, whats the point in trusting an ally that has an officer that will stab you in the back? Kinda defeats the point in trusting them in the first place.

On anoother note: It says you have seven reviews, but I only see the four me and SN left last time, what gives?

Gasp, I wonder what Lu Meng's thinking!

And I always thought tacticians and strategists were the same thing. Huh. Learn something new everyday! :D

Lawl at Yang Yi pulling a Phoenix Wright.

Sorry my "reviews" are never reviews, but comments. I'm horrible at giving critiques (not that I feel the need to point out something you did or did not do).

Enjoying it so far!

In reply to what you said in the beginning: Phoenix Wright is awesome. XD

Hmm, I've been thinking of including a footnote/bibliography thing in my story, but I'm too lazy to try and find every little site I looked at. Sigh.

I can tell this will be another fantastic story!

Lol, scholar Bitch Fight.

Yang Yi, shut up if you don't have anything positive to say.

Ironic how most new recruits Liu Bei obtain are all Zhuge Liang's friends except Cui Zhouping who decide to be a civil office staying behind at Cao Cao's and Xu Shu who became a lawman even thought both don't like Cao Pi.

Zhuge Liang and Ma Liang are sworn brothers and historically they were known childhood wise. Koei should have given him an unique model because he's the real backstory on Yi Ling and died there. I want Zhao Yun OUT of the Yi Ling story to prevent farther insult.(You know what I mean...)

Aqua, you bring me a lesson on chinese. =)

Well written, I see there is someone in Shu (Other than Ma Dai I think) and you respect greatly.

What can I say about this chapter, everything flowed well, Ma Su is an adorable little kid, and Ma Liang, well, he seems like a preety cool guy.

And that song from the 3K show at the end was a nice touch (I tried to get into that show awhile ago, but the first episode was so damn long that less than halfway through I went "Fuck this!").

Anyway, nice work and I hope to see how this continues.