that was a good story :) its hard to find fics that stay in character like this, how tyson is serious but you don't see that side of him normally right? but whatever he said definitely seemed like he'd say it. good job :D

~hikari-kasumi

That was really good. Please keep writing. I love Tyson and Hilary. And that was so sweet. He really does understand. Wow.
Its weird how Hilary didn't know about the bit beasts and all. I found it hard to accept that she didn't know everything from the beginning. I'm so use to just seeing her there and all.
AWESOME!

That was really sweet. You did a great job on the interaction between Tyson&Hilary! You ketp their personalities true to the show and added alot of deep Friendship, to small Romance in this which is just like their relationship in the series! I sure hope that you write more Tyson/Hilary fics like this; whether they be one-shots or multi-chapters! I really wanna see more from you in the future! Great job on this!

-DarkDremora4

Another great classic from RedWheeler! Keep going with the Tyson/Hilary fics. And I can't find anything to critise because it's perfect. ^_^

waah i so love your TyHil Stories.. they're amazing!

ok this time i had to actually read the first paragraph before i realized it was you. =P
really nice story! very well-written as usual =)

heyy - wow! this is a really good fic ^-^ its made it a whole lot clear for me to understand how hilary's view changed on certain things over time =D you should be proud of yourself! well done and write more! ^-^

Aw, cute fic! I have to say that you are probably one of the best Tyson/Hilary writers there is. Keep up the good work and I hope you write another fic soon!

are there more chapsters or is this just a oneshot friendship?
it wasreally good!

Hey!
Well, you know, I really don't have anything to say to this- there were no spelling mistakes, not typos, no grammatical errors, or anything of the sort.
It was really, really well written. I was really impressed.
So basically, if I haven't made myself clear, I liked the story :P I liked the theme, and the way it was written, and the way you portrayed both characters. Lol. I'm sorry, I have no criticisms so I'm left with nothing to say! Keep writing- it was really good!!